1. DLP Flash Christmas Competition + Writing Marathon 2024!

    Competition topic: Magical New Year!

    Marathon goal? Crank out words!

    Check the marathon thread or competition thread for details.

    Dismiss Notice

  2. Hi there, Guest

    Only registered users can really experience what DLP has to offer. Many forums are only accessible if you have an account. Why don't you register?
    Dismiss Notice
  3. Introducing for your Perusing Pleasure

    New Thread Thursday
    +
    Shit Post Sunday

    READ ME
    Dismiss Notice
DLP Story Competition Guest User Registration Nag SPS + NTT

Chandelier- Artemis Day- PG13

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Manatheron, Apr 3, 2009.

3.4242424964905/5, 33 votes
  1. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

    Joined:
    Dec 12, 2006
    Messages:
    1,166
    Apr 3, 2009 #1
    Title: Chandelier
    Author: Artemis Day
    Rating:pG-13
    Genre:Humor
    DLP Category:Funny stories
    Pairing: H/Hr
    Status:Complete
    Summary: Harry Potter, Alan Granger immediately decided, was probably the worst sort of son-in-law imaginable. Based on a true story.
    Link: Here

    Comments:

    Speaks for it's self.
     
  2. Anme

    Anme Professor

    Joined:
    Apr 17, 2008
    Messages:
    478
    Apr 3, 2009 #2
    Meh. Nothing that keeps the interest. Pretty predictable ending and not that funny or so.

    2/5
     
  3. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Apr 3, 2005
    Messages:
    5,129
    Location:
    Atlanta
    Apr 3, 2009 #3
    Eh. I was amused. 4/5
     
  4. Marsupial

    Marsupial Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Feb 22, 2008
    Messages:
    1,299
    Apr 3, 2009 #4
    I agree with the tandoori duck. Short and reasonably amusing, pretty much what a humor oneshot should be.
     
  5. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Apr 3, 2005
    Messages:
    5,129
    Location:
    Atlanta
    Apr 3, 2009 #5
    ... I loath you.
     
  6. vlad

    vlad Banned ~ Prestige ~

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2007
    Messages:
    678
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    Georgia, SSR
    High Score:
    2000
    Apr 3, 2009 #6
    It wasn't bad... but it wasn't really that good either.

    3/5
     
  7. Kensington

    Kensington Denarii Host DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Mar 11, 2008
    Messages:
    1,356
    Location:
    West Coast
    Apr 3, 2009 #7
    It was fairly entertaining. Yet as Vlad said, it wasn't great either.

    3/5.

    Sree/Narf/Jolly Rancher/Daffy Duck: Shouldn't you have said "You're dithspicable"?
     
  8. LuxDragon

    LuxDragon Fourth Year

    Joined:
    Aug 22, 2007
    Messages:
    117
    Apr 4, 2009 #8
    For a 1-shot. 4/5. I smiled and I needed one today.
     
  9. meatzman2

    meatzman2 Backtraced

    Joined:
    Nov 7, 2008
    Messages:
    526
    Location:
    Melbourne, Australia
    Apr 4, 2009 #9
    It was alright, I think I would have enjoyed it more if they had been having sex though. As it was the surprise ending well I can't say I expected it, but it didn't make me crack a smile.

    3/5 because it's averagely amusing.
     
  10. Silens Cursor

    Silens Cursor The Silencer DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Nov 23, 2008
    Messages:
    2,219
    Location:
    The other side of reality
    Apr 4, 2009 #10
    Not what I expected but not really amusing either. Nothing that made me laugh out loud, and I caught onto the 'twist' pretty quickly. In short, nothing that really kep me entertained. I'm giving it 2/5 for some entertaining dialogue, but nothing higher.
     
  11. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

    Joined:
    Jan 31, 2008
    Messages:
    1,163
    Location:
    At your mothers house
    Apr 13, 2009 #11
    Meh. Amusing, sort of. 3.5/5
     
  12. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Mar 16, 2006
    Messages:
    1,511
    Location:
    One of the Shires
    High Score:
    9,373
    Apr 13, 2009 #12
    Well this is just my sort of humour so I laughed uproariously at it. 4/5 from me.
     
  13. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Nov 11, 2005
    Messages:
    559
    Location:
    Englandshire
    High Score:
    5,725
    Apr 13, 2009 #13
    It got a laugh form me, and the author didn't try to over extend it beyond where it needed to finish. So 4/5.
     
  14. Snarf

    Snarf Squanchin' Party Bro! ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

    Joined:
    Apr 27, 2007
    Messages:
    18
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    Forty-Six & 2
    High Score:
    1,832
    Apr 13, 2009 #14
    I'm surprised with the general apathy towards this story. I thought it was bloody perfect, if a bit predictable. Still, that just made me laugh all the more when you finally came to the twist. I think this deserves to be in the library for that quick, refreshing humor that most authors don't achieve. 4/5 for me.
     
  15. sincostan

    sincostan High Inquisitor

    Joined:
    Jan 7, 2008
    Messages:
    547
    Location:
    socal
    Apr 13, 2009 #15
    Funny, but the revelation of the punchline at the end is a little flat. 3/5.
     
  16. Stenstyren

    Stenstyren Professor

    Joined:
    Jan 9, 2009
    Messages:
    465
    Apr 13, 2009 #16
    The ending should maybe have been shorter so that the punchline came quicker. Think that would have been more of a laugh.

    Still a good story, 3,5 from me!
     
  17. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

    Joined:
    Jul 5, 2006
    Messages:
    1,789
    Location:
    California
    Apr 13, 2009 #17
    I'm also giving it a 3. It made me smile, but that's about all it did. I say it's Bin worthy at the least.
     
Loading...
Similar Threads
  1. IdSayWhyNot

    Oneshot The Tale of the Three Brothers by IdSayWhyNot - PG13

    IdSayWhyNot, Sep 13, 2010, in forum: Almost Recommended
    Replies:
    28
    Views:
    13,736
    Manatheron
    Sep 26, 2010
  2. White Rabbit

    Abandoned Owl Treats and Firewhiskey by Artemis Fei - T

    White Rabbit, Mar 30, 2008, in forum: Almost Recommended
    Replies:
    15
    Views:
    11,100
    Anarchy
    Jan 25, 2013
  3. Jearom

    Oneshot Hermione Granger and the Very Blue Morning By Aelfwine - PG13 - One Shot

    Jearom, Feb 15, 2008, in forum: Almost Recommended
    Replies:
    9
    Views:
    5,747
    Richard
    Feb 18, 2008
  4. Manatheron

    Mahou mo Ken by Enterprise1701-d - PG13

    Manatheron, Jan 3, 2008, in forum: Almost Recommended
    Replies:
    20
    Views:
    8,628
    Giovanni
    Jan 8, 2008
  5. Mordecai

    Domino Effect by willowbee - AnitaBlake:VH - PG13

    Mordecai, Sep 20, 2007, in forum: Almost Recommended
    Replies:
    16
    Views:
    6,768
    Lincos
    Oct 6, 2007