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Competent Dumbledore

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Alraune, Feb 15, 2011.

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  1. Alraune

    Alraune Seventh Year

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    I miss Dumbledore. I cry every time I read a fic where he's senile or manipulatively evil. I weep every time I see him beaten by some douchey teenager and his mary-sue girlfriend.

    I'm looking for fics where Dumbledore is the badass wizard that scared Voldemort and beat Grindlewald.

    Edit: Not Dumbledore-centric fics, just one where he is a positive influence on Harry's life and not the devil in disguise.
     
  2. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    I'd also like to find one of these stories, where he's more of a positive influence/good character, and not just a poorly written, one dimensional "HAHA I HAVEZ UR MONEYZ!" manipulative bastard.

    I think they're pretty rare, though; most authors/authoresses douche out, and buy into cliches. :(
     
  3. Zennith

    Zennith Pebble Wrestler ~ Prestige ~

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    By the Divining Light.



    Read it now.
     
  4. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    The closest thing I've read is moshpitstories' Echoes of Power: Anger.
    It's got Dumbledore in an active working relationship with Harry.

    Going to warn you though, it's hardly standard DLP fare - while it doesn't really fall into cliches, the author and DLP had a bit of a spat about 3 years ago. The pacing is also weird, with 370k words covering a month of time in the story, though enough happens for that not to be incredibly slow (at the rate the plot progresses, the rest of the story could be covered in another 500k words or so). You'd have to read the last 5 chapters to get that though, because a lot of plot points are resolved/explained there.

    And yeah whatever, probably future H/G, though its not really a problem with her not being a Mary Sue.

    Edit: and yeah I'm kinda annoyed that there don't seem to be any Mentor!Dumbledore fics at all, nmb's work excluded.
     
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    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    I remember reading a somewhat ridiculous fic recently involving Dumbledore actually training Harry for some reason. There were a lot of dark wizards left around Europe and at one point Dumbles and Harry attacked one of them in a magical tower. Another memorable thing about the fic was that Ron wasn't bashed at all, I remember Harry training against him with a bunch of handicaps. I'll look around and see if I can find it.
     
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  8. silverlasso

    silverlasso Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Dumbledore is pretty good in neren's Incorruptible (look in WBA), but unfortunately it hasn't been updated in a while.
     
  9. richardl

    richardl First Year

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    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6359413/1/The_Warlocks_Apprentice
     
  10. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    Normally, any fic without the words "manipulative," "coot," or "goat" in reference to Dumbledore are on the right track. Fics that also feature him in relatively small doses are on the right path towards a properly characterized Dumbledore as well.
     
  11. imanut

    imanut First Year

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    I second Shezza's Dumbledore, he was very very competent.
     
  12. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Right, totally forgot: Perspicacity's Dagger and Rose has a mentor!Dumbledore but it's been a while since I've read it so I can't really comment on the quality. On the plus side, it's H/Fleur.
     
  13. silverlasso

    silverlasso Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Damn, just thought of the perfect fic! Dumbledore in Partially Kissed Hero is spectacularly well-written and is a great example of a good mentor figure.
     
  14. PinstripedPajamas

    PinstripedPajamas Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    No.

    Just, no.
     
  15. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Yeah, read PKH if you want to find out how not write a manipulative!Dumbledore.
     
  16. Zennith

    Zennith Pebble Wrestler ~ Prestige ~

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    I dunno man, the more I think about it... I think Lionheart's Dumbledore just might be the best I've ever read.
     
  17. silverlasso

    silverlasso Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    See, even Zennith agrees. And he can write pretty damn well.
     
  18. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Agreed, and he practically wrote the guide on timeloop fics.
     
  19. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I'm not sure I get that reference ^^
    His Naruto fic? I don't read Naruto fanfics.. >.>
     
  20. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    If you ever decide to, Never read his.

    So fucking awful.
     
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