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Curse of the Reapers by deanine - (T)

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by e1, Oct 14, 2008.

  1. e1

    e1 Third Year

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    Title: Curse of the Reapers
    Author: deanine
    Rating: T
    Genre: Drama
    DLP Category: The Alternate's
    Pairing: Harry/?
    Status: Work in Progress (120K so far)

    Summary: It's a world under the thumb of an ancient emperor. Muggle society has been oppressed beyond recognition. Wizards rule over all, their only laws defined by power. This is the story of a rebellion, a family, a traitor, and the long road home. AU

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2376581/1/Curse_of_the_Reapers

    Probably one of the best AU fics I've ever come across in HP fandom. The writing is top notch. 5/5! I'm surprised this hasn't been posted for review in DLP before ...
     
  2. Gizmore

    Gizmore Minister of Swedish Affairs DLP Supporter

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    English - Drama - Harry P. & Lily P.
    I'm checking it out. I'll edit when I've read a few chapters. :D

    EDIT:
    Gay names.
    A prophecy that has NOTHING to do with the one in HP.
    Some emperor drinking elixir of life.

    After reading the first chapter there isn't really anything I like.
    The second chapter is even worse, all characters is waaay off, I know it's an AU, but still... It's annoying as hell.
    Chapter three. NO, just no.
    I can't stand reading this shit, even if there are some H/L in there
    New characters with old names? No thanks.
    Not my cup of tea. I'm sure that there are people who'd enjoy it though. (Crazy fangirls)

    1/5
     
    Last edited: Oct 14, 2008
  3. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Firstly, it isn't Harry Potter. It is not Harry Potter, and unfortunately, it isn't too compelling as original fiction. People can indulge in poetic writing style, but it cannot extend into the dialogue.

    Agreed about the names. Turpin is canon, but putting Emperor before it just cracks me up. Add Elixir of Life, and you have a mockery of a fic.

    Ocascia brings the word troll to mind.

    I do like how there isn't much sense for a timeframe. Emperor being the son of a Roman general while drinking Elixir of Life. The settings though are also unrecognizable (Misty Forest? Is this a Final Fantasy crossover), but less pleasantly so.

    2/5. It was readable, but was also what it took to make me look favorably on Wit of the Raven and A Second Chance at Life.

    I have the strangest feeling that this will be more appreciated somewhere in the ([very] distant) future.
     
  4. knothead

    knothead Groundskeeper

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    <-sarcasm->
    Oh joy, power levels.
    <-/sarcasm->
     
  5. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Oops.

    1/5 I meant.
     
  6. deathinapinkboa

    deathinapinkboa Minister of Magic

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    Is Harry Potter OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!
     
  7. Magus

    Magus Groundskeeper

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    No. Lets see, ooh the boredom readings are off the charts!

    Oh no, sorry I was getting confused before, this is obviously Red Leader on the flying carpet.

    Good lord, I'm registering a disappointed rating of TWO-AND-A-HALF!!!!!!!
     
  8. Novera

    Novera Seventh Year

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    Gah, couldn't get past the first chapter with out scrolling through huge parts of it. The seer was fail.

    1/5
     
  9. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I read this way back on MNFF. It's well written with a good atmosphere and a few interesting ideas, but it's got almost no plot, bad characterisation, lots of bad ideas as well as the few good ones, and all in all is pretty dull.

    2/5
     
  10. Othalan

    Othalan Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    At first glance, I thought the title was Curse of the Raepers which made me lol a little bit. I actually read this a while back (well, I tried to read it anyway), but was bored shitless by the author's style. Also, to me, at least, it reads like fanfiction, where the author seems to expect the reader to understand everything already, when it's essentially an original fic with a few fanfic names and concepts.

    1/5 for bad ideas, poor execution, and the fact that it bores me to tears.
     
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