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Dark Potter Chronicles Year One by perphektsolid - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Falcore, Nov 2, 2007.

  1. Falcore

    Falcore Squib

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    Title: Dark Potter Chronicles Year One
    Author: perphektsolid
    Rating: M
    Genre: Adventure/Drama
    DLP Category: The Alternate's
    Pairing: Harry/Tonks
    Status: WIP
    Summary: Harry Potter has been abused and mistreated his entire short life. But, on his eleventh birthday Harry recieves the greatest gift he could imagine...the truth of his past...and proof that he isn't as insignifigant as his family wants him to believe.
    Link: Dark Potter Chronicles Year One


    I liked the way this story started it only has one chapter so far but I think it has alot of potential.
     
  2. Lincos

    Lincos Professor DLP Supporter

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    The first chapter didnt really go anywhere though. Just showing Harry getting the crap beat out of him. Maybe the snake bit will be more important to Harry's personality in the next chapter, but who knows.

    I reserve judgement for later chapters.
     
  3. Palver

    Palver High Inquisitor

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    Same for me. But "Shadow Mage" thing made me cringe.
     
  4. [KS18]Raziel44

    [KS18]Raziel44 Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    The little boy looked so calm, so innocent that it sickened the man standing before him. Red eyes with slits like a snake looked down upon the boy sitting in the cot in the upper nursery of the cottage in Godric’s Hollow. The little boy was looking through the bars of the cot at the mane of red hair that belonged to Lily Potter, who was laying out on the floor looking at her son with vacant expressionless eyes................................................. yeah i read so much and i closed the window
     
  5. Demonic Chair Stealer

    Demonic Chair Stealer Second Year

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    It feels like I've read this before many, many times but I will give it one more chapter before I give up on it. You might take this a slightly more original direction
     
  6. Vtigo

    Vtigo Second Year

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    Is it just me or is any fic recently shit unless its done by a member here?
     
  7. Randeemy

    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Yes its just you. Often authors join here after recieving reviews from existing members extending an invite
     
  8. Mechanicalchrist

    Mechanicalchrist Groundskeeper

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    Shadow Mage... yeah that doesn't bode well. Also, that bit about Voldemort feeling struck me as a bad sign.
     
  9. Eladi

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    Ah...... No

    REJECTED
     
  10. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    The author never got past the first chapter, which wasn't all that terrible from what I skimmed, unless you consider overly victimised Harry as such, but it wasn't all that good either.

    2/5, nominated for removal.
     
  11. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    Not that much of a chronicle, if it's only one chapter.
     
  12. Admonkeystrator

    Admonkeystrator Seventh Year

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    He knew he wasn't a light man and that the skeletal horse was suffering under him, but it was carrying on like a champion. He'd have to give it an extra helping of meat when they got back to the castle.

    Bestiality!Hagrid in chapter 1. That's got to be worth bonus points.
    Maybe it's just me...

    It did close a plot hole, about how Hagrid got to Godric's Hollow before Sirius.

    I can't condemn this fic just yet. Too soon.
     
  13. Anarchy

    Anarchy Half-Blood Prince DLP Supporter

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    You can, because it hasn't been updated in three years.
     
  14. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    Yup. I think that it's safe to say that the fic's either as dead as a dodo, or as dead as Saddam Hussein's current love life. (Ya know, being dead and all).
     
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