Title: Downfall
Author: Vlad
Category: WIP
Fandom: Pokemon
Rating: T
Chapters: 5
Words: 24,438
Updated: February 26, 2010
Published: February 9, 2010
Status: Abandoned
Pairings: Ash K./Satoshi & Erika
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5733358/1/Downfall
Summary: No matter how times change, the darker side of man and monster always struggle to be let free. Ash, a young man with dreams of joining the gladiatorial pokemon league, finds himself instead thrust into the middle of a far greater struggle.



Checked by Minion, May 12, 2013

 

I would say that it's surprisingly good, but its Vlad. Of course its good. Pretty good characterizations and interactions. The plot, thus far, is also pretty enthralling. I hadn't even realized I'd sat through four chapters.

Overall, I do like, but the preface to the chapters from the "Unknown Sources" papers kind of get tedious after a while. I can understand the need for them, expanding information you can't easily work into the story, but still.

4/5 at this point.

 

5/5 at this point. Shits pretty epic and coming off all the other stuff I've been reading from Vlad, its like a never-ending Pokemon high. :awesome

 

Oh yea, Vlad's shit plus Sun Soul is just awesome, i can't see Pokemon in the same light anymore .

Also, 5/5 for both stories.