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Abandoned Für Das Größere Wohl by Pseudonym Sam - T

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Mordac, Jan 18, 2009.

4.0606060028076/5, 33 votes
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  1. Mordac

    Mordac Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Jan 18, 2009 #1
    Title: Für Das Größere Wohl
    Author: Pseudonym Sam
    Rating: T
    Genre: General
    DLP Category: Either General Fics or Humor
    Pairing: N/A
    Chapters: 15
    Words: 87,472
    Updated: January 3, 2011
    Published: August 30, 2008
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: Dieter Heydrich is a model German boy with perfect Aryan complexion, exemplary conduct in the Hitler Youth, and fanatical loyalty to his beloved Führer. But on his eleventh birthday, he discovers a hidden magical world led by Gellert Grindelwald...
    Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/4508571/1/Fur_Das_Grobere_Wohl

    Warning for anti-semitism, homophobia and pretty much general racism against "non-Aryans". You've been warned.


    Checked by Minion, August 19, 2013
     
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  2. Knox

    Knox The Last Remnant DLP Supporter

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    Jan 18, 2009 #2
    I don't know if I can read this, I would have to stop loling to read it but I can't seem to stop. XD


    Edit: Holy shit I just figured it out, Mordac is a Nazi! 卐 D:


    SECOND EDIT: For the love of Christ, stop posting shit in story threads. Either make a post relevant to the discussion, or stop abusing your keyboard.
     
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  3. Robo Jesus

    Robo Jesus High Inquisitor

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    Jan 18, 2009 #3
    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v507/godslefthand2/TReich1.jpg


    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v297/godslefthand/JP4Badass.jpg


    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v507/godslefthand2/DinoForce.jpg


    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v297/godslefthand/JP4.jpg


    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v507/godslefthand2/Nazis_riding_dinosaurs.jpg


    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v507/godslefthand2/DinoTeamNazis.jpg
     
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  4. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    Jan 18, 2009 #4
    Lolwut?

    And damn, that's an original story if there ever was one. Why didn't I see this comming? >_>


    Edit:
    Eh, the German stuff isn't even horrible. It's an interesting setting. The author's got a strange taste in street names, though ... Peanutstreet? Potatostreet? But otherwise it's ... original ... as I said.

    Also, Johanna <3

    Ah, the memories.
     
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  5. Mordac

    Mordac Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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  6. eXcalite

    eXcalite Seventh Year

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    Jan 18, 2009 #6
    Whats it with those Dinonazis?
     
  7. Robo Jesus

    Robo Jesus High Inquisitor

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    Jan 18, 2009 #7
    I figure with Mordac being called a nazi that he would appreciate some Nazi Dinosaurs.
     
  8. Peteks

    Peteks Order Member

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    Jan 18, 2009 #8
    Read it out of interest. It wasn't bad at all, but I won't probably start following a story about Nazi!Wizard or some such, as it doesn't include Harry.

    3/5 still, if I would give ratings this early.
     
  9. knothead

    knothead Groundskeeper

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    Jan 19, 2009 #9
    I might continue reading it because it's at least somewhat original. Considering that it's not been updated in three months, I don't know if the story will continue. Otherwise, I agree.
     
  10. Tinn Tam

    Tinn Tam Review Goddess Retired Staff

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    Jan 19, 2009 #10
    Okay, that was fun, now stop posting spamming pics or Mummy will be angry.
     
  11. Mordac

    Mordac Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Jan 24, 2009 #11
    Updated today. :awesome
     
  12. Vegemeister

    Vegemeister Seventh Year

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    Jan 25, 2009 #12
    Fail. I's not harry-centric, and the premise is utterly dumb.
     
  13. Rin

    Rin Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter

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    Jan 25, 2009 #13
    I'd like it a lot more if it were Harry centric.

    Then again . . . I'm biased.
     
  14. DarkAizen

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    Jan 25, 2009 #14
    It`s a good story , the main character seems like an inteligent kid . But the story progresses very slow , I cant imagine how many chapters the author needs to get through 7 years of school . Also the ideea is very ironic : Dieter hates Jews and Homosexuals . At school he will be hated because he is muggleborn .

    Looking forward to more . 3.5/5
     
  15. Nihil Videmus

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    Jan 29, 2009 #15
    It's certainly original and shows promise, but it's too early in the story to get a good look at it.
     
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  16. Sophie

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    Jan 29, 2009 #16
    Interesting idea. I'm really looking forward to Dieter's first encounter with the other students, how Durmstrang will be etc. The title does sound a bit stilted, though.
     
  17. DarkAizen

    DarkAizen Professor DLP Supporter

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    Feb 4, 2009 #17
    Read your new chapter.

    Nothing new.

    Are you gonna keep it at this pace?One chapter another day in Dieter`s life?Because if you do this,your story will be probably abandoned before Christiano Ronaldo scores another goal.

    I understand that you try to show us how things worked in Hitler`s Germany,but you move too slow. Chapter 2 and 3 were unnecessary.

    The story is good , you obviously have a lot of knowledge about those times, but it needs to move faster.

    Hope that you wont make Drumstang a Hogwarts!clone,that will ruin it for
    me.

    [​IMG]

    Respect my AUTHORITY!
     
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  18. Mordac

    Mordac Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Feb 21, 2009 #18
    This has been updated again, if anyone cares.
     
  19. Rin

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    Feb 21, 2009 #19
    I love this story. The amazing amount of detail the author is using really brings the fic to life. It also has just the right balance of German and English, so that you get the feel of the German setting, but you don't feel like the author is just showing off their German - a common problem with a lot of anime-based fics, where authors use gratuitously copious amounts of Japanese just because they can (and more often than not, despite the fact that they can't!).
     
  20. Sesc

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    Feb 21, 2009 #20
    Fuck, this has disgustingly epic ideas. He still sometimes goes the easy route with the names (e.g. the name of the seamstress is Seamstress), but Volksbesen for a broom-name? As opposed to Volkswagen? Why the hell did no one (me included, and it's my fucking country) think of that before?

    Also, it had a new take on wand-making, and one that makes sense, too. So all the unimaginative fucks, who can't do no better than copying the old clichéd 'he holds his hands over the wood and than the cores', just got pwned.

    ATM, easily a 4/5.
     
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