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WIP Fallen Maiden by Ravell Aqim - T

Discussion in 'Other Fandoms Review Board' started by Puzzled, Mar 6, 2021.

  1. Puzzled

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    Title: Fallen Maiden
    Author: Ravell Aqim
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Angst
    Status: In-Progress
    Library Category:
    Pairings: Pyrrha/Sadness
    Summary: Pyrrha Nikos had been willing to give up almost everything to fulfill her destiny to protect the people of Remnant; almost everything, except the very thing which was taken. Now, driven by loss and regret, she has little room in her heart except for one goal, one destiny: to make Cinder Fall pay for what she has done. Pyrrha lives/Jaune dies post-volume 3 divergence.
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13702851/1/Fallen-Maiden
    AO3

    Pyrrha going on a rampage is an obvious story and I've never seen it until now. I don't really follow RWBY anymore, but this diverges from Volume 3 and no further knowledge is necessary. The fights are fun, and the characters react nicely to changing circumstances. It's got one chapter left and even if it stopped here I wouldn't hesitate to recommend it.

    It's a nice fast read and it's a fun one.

    5/5