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Complete Finding Closure - SG:A/NCIS

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Download, Mar 19, 2015.

  1. Download

    Download Auror ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Title: Finding Closure
    Author: RockzaDeb
    Genre: Angst/Hurt/Comfort
    Category: Other fandoms
    Chapters: 18
    Words: 41k
    Updated: May 26, 2010
    Published: Sep 12, 2009
    Status: Complete
    Pairings: n/a
    Summary:
    Updated first 11 chapters - Lt Ford has been missing for over a year. No one will tell the family anything beyond 'Missing In Action - presumed dead' and 'I'm sorry.' President Hayes intevenes and instigates a special investigation into the Lt's status.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5369844/1/Finding-Closure

    I can't say anything critical about this. Basically the President decides the SGC needs some NCIS investigators in on the program to investigate deaths.

    Great potential for a sequel there too.

    5/5 for me.
     
    Last edited: Mar 19, 2015
  2. dmacx

    dmacx Groundskeeper

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    I read this a couple of years ago.

    Sheppard's characterization killed this for me. Someone who has both faced down and been fed on by the Wraith isn't going to be intimidated by NCIS agents. Not even a little.

    The only way Hayes is going to bring NCIS in on the Stargate program, much less Atlantis, is if the NCIS team is going to be permanent. And why bring them in now? Shitloads of SGC personnel have been whacked over the years. Is Ford the only one with a family that wants to know what happened?

    Like most of RockzaDeb's stories, my SOD was broken in the first couple of chapters.

    2/5 because the technical writing is pretty good.

    Try "The Hawk and The Dove" if you want a decent story from her.
     
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