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WIP Foundations of the World by 50caliberchaos - M - Pokemon

Discussion in 'Games' started by Lucius Rex, Aug 23, 2014.

  1. Lucius Rex

    Lucius Rex First Year DLP Supporter

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    Title: Foundations of the World
    Fandom: Pokemon
    Author: 50caliberchaos
    Rating: M
    Genre: Adventure/Romance
    Status: WIP
    Category: Misc
    Pairings: None Specified
    Summary: Hoenn lays broken, reeling from civil war and suffocating beneath the tyrannical grip of warlords who rampage across the land. To this shattered country May, Wallace, and their allies bring a message of hope. But can May's idealism survive the realities of war? Can Wallace survive his disease? Fate has them set on a collision course with monsters, gods, and perhaps even each other
    Link:https: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10539516/1/Foundations-of-the-World

    I just found the sequel to Sun Soul. The story focuses on Hoenn with many POV Characters. Like Wallace and May. I give 5/5.
     
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  2. PinstripedPajamas

    PinstripedPajamas Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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  3. Blorcyn

    Blorcyn High Inquisitor DLP Supporter DLP Silver Supporter

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    Just got through reading the chapters that are up and the quality is still there. The characters he's introduced are very interesting as PoVs. If it lives up to Sun Soul then this will be a solid 5/5 to me.

    I worry, that in the interests of a shorter story, some scenes might become told rather than shown as in the most recent Shelley chapter regarding May. But, the whole story is still being established and a quick pace isn't unappreciated with the scope of the story he wants to tell.

    I have a vague memory that he said he wanted it to ultimately become a slight ME fusion, but I can't find the note. Does anyone else know if that's the case?
     
  4. yak

    yak Moderator Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I would've liked to see the fandom listed somewhere in that. Preferably somewhere prominent, such as the thread title.
     
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