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Abandoned Harry Potter and the Azkaban Guards by Shadow101 - T

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Midknight, Aug 9, 2005.

  1. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Title: Harry Potter and the Azkaban Guards
    Author: Shadow101
    Rating: T
    Pairing: Harry/Blaize(Female)
    Category: Action/Adventure/Fantasy
    Chapters: 6
    Words: 18,321
    Updated: Sep 29, 2005
    Published: Apr 7, 2005
    Status: Abanoned

    Summary:postOoTP After being locked up at the Dursley’s, Harry's taken away to a new family, where the way of a Slytherin rules. Determination leads him to gain knowledge, seeking the power to destroy the Dark Lord for good.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2340812/1/

    Fem Blaise Zabini, great start to the story so far.


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  2. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    It's a good fic. It boasts a few cliches that I don't like, namely Ron and Hermione getting exclusive training from the Order to "protect" Harry at school. But still decent, even if the author is slow with updates.
     
  3. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    been reading it. over all it's pretty good
     
  4. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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  5. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    That Ron and Hermione thing with getting training from the Order to 'protect' Harry always makes me laugh. This dude is supposed to be killing Voldemort one day. How the fuck is he supposed to do this with no training and his little bitchy friends 'protecting' him.

    It's insane.
     
  6. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    i always wonder why people think there must be a reason to not be friends with them...i mean sometimes people just stop being friends with each other not because the person did domething to them but maybe to others...i know that people just part sometime with out warning so why can harry just part like that?
     
  7. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Because you gotta remember... they are the Golden Trio... their friendship is above any mortal bonding.

    HAH!
     
  8. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    even gods split
     
  9. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    BLASPHEMY!! NOT MY GOLDEN TRIO!
     
  10. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    that another thing why golden? why not crimson?
     
  11. RagefulLlama

    RagefulLlama Seventh Year

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    Golden Trio eh. I think the golden is more the hero worship of Harry and by association making the trio golden. I would think that the golden is some weird reference to 'the light side of the force erm *cough* magic' I mean. Mind you this is probably because if people started running around calling it the 'white' trio people might start getting ideas about them. Especially people in this forum if the newly opened sick & twisted has anything to say about it :roll:

    I like this fic the only thing that seems a tiny bit off for me is that I think Blaise let down the walls a bit to quickly. I'm not complaining mind I just think that like 5 paragraphs going from ice queen - time skip description - jumping around crying with happiness due to owl scores. It just struck me as odd, it's just a little thing but I don't really think that if she's spent her entire life being the ice queen she would let down the act after 2 weeks.
     
  12. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    Golden Trio because they're of course better than anyone not gold, so it's just a way to show their superiority over everybody else, without rubbing it in everyone's face (not really successful), which would be done if they were called the Godlike Trio.
     
  13. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    ofcourse theirs most people belive it's because their all the high and mights lords of Griffindor( Red and GOLD) I've read one where they were the silver trio Ron is being molested/raped by Percy, Hermiones parents don't want her so she cuts her self and Harry's uncle and them are so abusive he's covered in scars and in their all Slytherin
     
  14. BlackPhoenix

    BlackPhoenix Second Year

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    sorry 'bout the double post but it's been updated with a short chapter but over all it was pretty good. tiny bit of ron and hermione bashing. not that great a chapter but very interesting
     
  15. RagefulLlama

    RagefulLlama Seventh Year

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    Finally updated again :twisted:
     
  16. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I hate the "Golden Trio" cliche.

    Well actually I just hate 98.4% of them... (the 1.4% of them that I do like is the 5% of Harry that actually has a dick and two nuts in Canon.)

    Ron- Jealous Hot-Tempered moron who thinks he is good at strategy "ooh look Harry a brain." Personally I think he was trying to put it in between his ears so he could say he had one.

    Hermione- "Books will teach me everything." Thank GOD no one ever gave her a copy of Mein Kampf.

    95% of Harry- I don't want to fight... Must be noble... Must be toothless... Must be all bark and no bite... Must be like that little asian guy in the kung fu movies who just sits there and doesnt do shit.

    5% of Harry- The only good part... The little asian dude in the kung foo movies who pimps the fuck out of everyone after his whole crew gets destroyed.

    This story intrests me... But it needs to update quicker.
     
  17. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Gio you mind if I borrow that situation and use it?
     
  18. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Not at all :)

    ... Seriously though... WAAAY to naive about the booksies.

    LOL :)

    Hermione Hitler... Kinda scary when you think about it, cuz there are actually people like that.

    Hermione- It was in a book it must be true.
    Homer Simpson- TV wouldn't lie to me.
     
  19. Antivash

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    O_O ... TV NO LIE! BAD GIO! TV NO LIE!

    thats... like... saying drinking smirnoff while eating burritos is .. bad for your health...
     
  20. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    OK OK OK!!!

    TV NEVER LIES!!!

    Thats why all those herbal substances that make you lose 500 pounds in 2 weeks work.
     
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