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Abandoned Harry Potter and the Sealed Fate by Dark Stallion - M

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Randeemy, Mar 10, 2008.

  1. Randeemy

    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Title: Sealed Fate
    Author: Dark Stallion
    Rating: R
    Genre: Action/Adventure
    DLP Category: Alternates

    Pairing: H/OC
    Words: 5,325
    Chapters: 1
    Published: April 04, 2008
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: AU; Taken from Number Four at the age of seven; Harry, along with two others, are trained to become the next generation of leaders for the secretive Council of Shadows. At the age of sixteen they are sent out to learn independently from wherever they choose; but the Council will be in touch, as will Voldemort, as Harry explores different branches of magic and a world of hidden politics.

    Link: http://www.patronuscharm.net/s/106/1/

    Formerly a timetravel fic. Dark Stallion started to rewrite it but didn't post more than one chapter.

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  2. enembee

    enembee The Nicromancer DLP Supporter

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    The author renamed all of the characters but Bill. It's hillarious. Sariel, Michael, Gabriel and Bill. :p

    Still reading, it's pretty good.

    EDIT: Nah, it lost the plot a bit, I'm not a fan but I won't argue that it's not well written. I'll refrain from scoring.
     
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  3. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    You could argue it's really William. Angels can give each other terms of endearment too...

    I like it. The interest factor's pretty high. As it stands, a 4/5, but I hope to see more soon.
     
  4. enembee

    enembee The Nicromancer DLP Supporter

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    You could, it just doesn't fit at all :p
     
  5. fash

    fash Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Not really my cup of tea, but thats not the story its my personal taste. (Hate stories where characters names are changed) I would give it a 4/5, seems to be written well, and im sure alot of people will like it.
     
  6. belladonna16

    belladonna16 Second Year

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    I enjoyed it (quelle shock, eh?).

    4/5 from me - it lost 2 points because of the 'let's go back in time and redo things' but gained a point for at least, so far, being an interesting do-over...
     
  7. Dark-Stallion

    Dark-Stallion Professor

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    Wow- very suprised that this made it in here, but it made my day!!!

    I'm currently rewriting this fic while still striving to get good enouhg grades for a top Uni place, so I'm sorry that I haven't updated. The plot is rather unique, or at least I would like to think so, but a large amount of things did not fit- and these are what I am going to try and iron out.

    But still, 'tis and honour to have been mentioned here =)

    Dark-Stallion
     
  8. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Bump.

    Anyone else want to rate this story? It's currently at 4 votes, 3.50. Right on the line.
     
  9. Grubdubdub

    Grubdubdub Supreme Mugwump

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    It says there's 3 chapters but in the link there's only 1. He deleted?
     
  10. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Yes, he did, apparently. The old link wasn't working, so I searched for it on PatronusCharm and linked the correct story. He did say he was rewriting it.
     
  11. Nicovi

    Nicovi Third Year

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    .epub downloads:
    Harry Potter and the Sealed Fate by Dark Stallion - (Mega, Mediafire)
     
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