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Complete Hero, Villain, Saviour, Conqueror by Lady Smoothie - T

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by ghst.san, Jun 2, 2005.

  1. ghst.san

    ghst.san Sixth Year

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    Title: Hero, Villain, Saviour, Conqueror
    Autor: Aerin
    Rating: T
    Genre: Drama/Angst
    Chapters: 32
    Words: 82,570
    Updated: Jul 19, 2005
    Published: Jan 24, 2005
    Status: Complete

    Summary: Post-OotP: In the summer after his fifth year, Harry is tried and sent to Azkaban. The catch: He's innocent. Follow Harry as he discovers his heritage... and all that comes with it.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2232745/1/


    One of my favourite Azkaban Fics. Give it a try its worth it :) .


    Sequel (though abandoned):
    Title: Subject, Ruler, Finder, Wanderer
    Rating: T
    Genre: Angst/Drama
    Chapters: 9
    Words: 31,715
    Updated: Dec 5, 2005
    Published: Aug 1, 2005
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: AU, Pre HBP, sequel to HVSC: After the last battle, Harry finds himself in another world, one where werewolves are locked away in silver cages, he died as a baby, there is no Lord Azkaban or Heir of the Six, and he must battle Riddle once moreā€¦ By Aerin.

    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2512172/1/Subject-Ruler-Finder-Wanderer




    Checked by Minion, June 28, 2015
    Added the sequel
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Jun 27, 2015
  2. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Its a pretty good story, I've had it bookmarked for a while now.

    I don't like several of the points the author used that seemed to come out of nowhere for no good reason, but for the most part it's a decent story.

    Weird place to stop the story for the sequel too, lol felt like it was about half done =(
     
  3. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Sequels up and the author totally fucked it up by moving Harry to some sort of alternate reality, and tossed out the good things he did have going in the first one =(

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2512172/2/
     
  4. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I didnt like the first one anyway. I remember ages ago i started reading it but i didnt get passed chapter 5 or something. Next time i read it i didnt get passed chapter 12. The next time only got to chapter 15.

    I just stopped after that. Something always just turned me off it.
     
  5. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    I don't like the sequel it's just strange, perhaps it gets better.
     
  6. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    read the frist one got lost in the end and.....the second one...never finished the first chapter
     
  7. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Doubt it.
     
  8. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    I second that, still it's a shame.
     
  9. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Uh...I just read ch 11, and Harry just made a cure for lycanthropy (by mixing together a bunch of random potions no less). He's not even good at potions and he finds a cure?!
     
  10. Anonymous

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    I stopped reading when they had "the Order of the Patroni" formed with Luna Lovegood. And the dude is LEADER of Azkaban, but he somehow goes back to Hogwarts. Nice. Just as logical as EVERY OTHER AUTHOR WHO WRITES AZKABAN!!!! :wall:
     
  11. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Yes, but I was bored. So I read 11 chapters, lol.
     
  12. realmess

    realmess Slug Club Member

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    I read it and am reading sequel, but I must say that my interest ebbed in the middle of the story. I loved it for a while, but now I can't convince myself to read the next chapter of the sequel. I'd say the quality started to diminish, and then the author/ess just had to force herself to write more. I liked it because they got Sirius back :p, and the whole rune thing at the begining, but now- the writing is uneven. I read one chapter and like it, then the next and hate it.
     
  13. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Yeah, forced writing is bad, the quality is never up to par. Which is why it's been so long since I updated, don't want to ruin my story too much.
     
  14. sephiroththebrokenangel

    sephiroththebrokenangel Fourth Year

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    azkaban fic

    i thought this was okay at first because the rune of azkaban idea was kind of original but i just completely lost interest in this story when the author put in the "Slayer of Deserving" stuff and the Order of Patroni
     
  15. Element

    Element Seventh Year

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    Can't force myself to read it after everything written here. I must say though, its probably got one of the coolest story names. I mean, super catchy :p
    I've never gotten the point of Harry healing Lupin of lycanthropy. I mean, it doesn't actually have any point in the plot, other than for Lupin to cry and give him a hug. If it had a purpose, like getting ex-werewolves on the side of the Light or some stuff, then maybe.
     
  16. Lord Dragon

    Lord Dragon DA Member

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    i read this story and think its prety good
     
  17. Lord Dragon

    Lord Dragon DA Member

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    On secont thought the end realy sucks. The sequel is preaty poor its slow and needs to be re vamped. It cant keep my intrest.
     
  18. Skykes

    Skykes Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    It's a good story at the start but then decreases in quality. the sequeal is slow also. but worth a read
     
  19. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    i have read the first chapter and cannot decide based on these reviews if i should continue. im pretty desperate right now and i just hope it doesnt become a lor dof caer azkaban remake, which i did not like. also, is their a pairing
     
  20. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    I always notice that if you get writer's block, just go back and read the entirety of what you've written so far. It helps, a lot.

    Edit: 50th post!
     
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