Title: Like a Puppet on a String
Author: silvernatasha
Summary: Blaise (male) goes to New Orleans on his summer vacation and learns Voodoo. In Hogwarts, with his buddy Draco he makes some changes to the voodoo doll, and with a strand of Hermoine's hair, they can control her every action.
Link: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=37977

I like this story, only 2 chapters but quality is better than quantity right? It's in one of my favorites. This story is brilliant but the down side of it is only 2 chapters. Good for a short read though.

 

I went ahead and gave it a read...

At a glance:

Cliche #1: Draco/Hermione are Head Boy/Girl
Cliche #2: Draco's actions towards Hermione
Cliche #3: Draco = teh sxe GAWD ZoMG!!!

Three strikes, it's out.

Well that and I hate Draco/Hermione pairings... And most non-Harry-Centric fics.

And as a separate note: f77 aren't you a bit young to be reading this shit?

 

After reading Gio's post, I'm a little discouraged from reading this.

 

This is suppose to be quality? Draco/Blaise/Hermione (m/m/f) threesome...ah-huh, right...

Just a headsup to what readers might end up seeing. This is from the other Draco/Blaise/Hermione fic called "Insatiable" she wrote.

Mm-hmm, cross dressing Draco, bi-boys, definitely fun for the whole gang, provided everyone's a slashy fan girl. No offense to slashy btw (if she's still here).

As for this fic. It hasn't gotten to the NC-17 parts yet but...won't be long I'm sure. Admittingly, spelling and grammar seems alright which arguably makes it better than most of the slash/pseudo slash/slash flavored fics out there...but quality. I don't think so.

PS: It's also not Harry-centric, which was probably a very good thing.

 

I tell you to start making QUALITY fucking posts, and you come up with this?

Do you not understand how threats work?

 

Did you actaully read it. The story is quite good,I will be pissed if it devolves into some sort of bi anything. But if Draco and Blaise double team Hermione all the better.

 

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/me runs this shit is going to get UGLY

 

Anyone think a 5 second head start is to much?*me thinks of all the fun people will have with this thread*

 

Lmao.

Yes, I did read/skim it. As for bi... True, where there is smoke, there isn't always fire. But in this case, let me say that there's a hell lot of smoke everywhere.

 

Yes, I did "actually read it", and I can quite honestly say that it has distinguished itself in a remarkably bad genre as being remarkably less than mediocre in said genre. In fact the only things it has going for it at the moment is that slash has yet to appear and that the spelling and grammer are readable. Sadly, the content is not.

Now I have a question for you, my mongoloid friend; did you exhaust your 1/3 of a brain cell with that abortion of a post? Did you feast on spray paint as a small child? Were you perhaps dropped on your head FROM A FUCKING SKYSCRAPER as a baby?

And then in your post you hope that it won't "devolve" into "some sort of bi anything". If the story were truly quality than this wouldn't matter, but since the story isn't any quality I am led to conclude that you have been spanking the monkey to this poorly written smut -- making this a truly sad day for mankind indeed.

 

Mid and Indo: I was already gone...

/me hides in bomb shelter.

 

I forgot to mention that it is abandoned.

I liked the concept of the story, where Draco and Blaise can control Hermoine's actions, sort of like an imperio except Hermoine can't break free. There isn't any gangbanging, or bi, or slash. There might have been, but since the author abandoned it, there isn't.

I dont doubt that it would have evolved into slashy/bi crap, but the two chapters so far are pretty good.

Yes I am a bit young to be reading this. *Looks over shoulder to see if mom is back*

 

A)What the fuck was the point in linking an abandoned, badly written gangbang/bi-destined smut fic that's not Harry centric.

B)What the fuck was the point in linking an abandoned, badly written gangbang/bi-destined smut fic that's not Harry centric, that's barely 3,000 words long.

C)Published in [2004-10-21] Updated [2005-01-07] ... this fucking story is OLDER then you are mentally! Jesus Christ man, last warning, step up, and act like anything other then a retarded Cupspeaker clone.

 

Cup: Dude, your avatar is fucking disgusting. Change it.

EDIT: Good. Glad you changed it.