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Oneshot Love Freely Given by magicofisis - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Alexx, Apr 25, 2014.

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2.2857143878937/5, 7 votes
  1. Alexx

    Alexx Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Apr 25, 2014 #1
    Title: Love Freely Given by magicofisis
    Author: magicofisis
    Rating: M
    Genre: Erotica
    Status: Oneshot
    Library Category: Restricted Section
    Pairings: Harry/Hermione
    Words: 5984
    Published: 10/23/2005
    Summary: Harry has insomnia. Hermione is a good friend. Written as a birthday gift fic for Annearchy. Harry/Hermione, PWP, First Time.
    Link: http://www.thequidditchpitch.org/viewstory.php?sid=662

    Well written, good H/Hr smut and the end is pure win. 4/5
     
  2. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Apr 26, 2014 #2
    Predictably, everyone is out of character.
    Predictably, it's porn "with a plot" (not really).
    It's about as vanilla as it gets. It's not atrociously written but it's not library material.
    2/5
     
  3. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Apr 26, 2014 #3
    To be fair, the author tagged it with PWP. "Plot, What Plot?"
     
  4. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Apr 26, 2014 #4
    Well, that was awful.

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  5. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Apr 27, 2014 #5
    Oh, is what what it stands for? I'm ignorant then, I'd always thought it implied that it was trying to have a plot. Porn naturally doesn't have any plot, kind of like what was posted here.
     
  6. Hachi

    Hachi Death Eater

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    Apr 27, 2014 #6
    PWP. Porn with plot ;)

    The story in itself is meh. Technical writing is fairly good, but the interactions are a bit awkward and not particularly interesting.
    All in all, 2.5/5
     
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