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March of the Golden King by Aelpho - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by MF DOOM, Feb 13, 2020.

  1. MF DOOM

    MF DOOM Second Year

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    Title: March of the Golden King
    Author: Aelpho
    Rating: M
    Genre: Adventure
    Status: In-Progress
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    Summary: "Dreams disappear when the dreamer wakes. Every last one of them with no exception." The final day of the Golden King's dream had come, but what if he was wrong?
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13117108/1/March-of-the-Golden-King

    This is very interesting story in that the author really capture Gilgamesh's personality. Gilgamesh talk and act like himself. He isn't a caricature.

    The world-building is meticulous. Every character feels real, they have their own lives, own problems. They are not only there for the plot purpose.

    5/5.
     
  2. Erandil

    Erandil Minister of Magic

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    It might be a good idea to include the fact that this is a crossover with Overlord because I don't care how closely it follows the FN characterization I have little interest in that fandom and what it entails.
     
  3. Republic

    Republic The Snow Queen –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Might be a good idea to at least point out its supposed to be FN. Gilgamesh is not a character existing purely in the vacuum of the nasuverse.
     
  4. thattin

    thattin Second Year

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    This isn't great honestly. It seems well written enough grammatically but as of chapter 4 literally nothing important has happened (and that was a lot of words for nothing to happen). Gilgamesh killed some stuff wow. People made plans which even now I can tell won't really matter because of the ridiculous power difference between Gilgamesh and anyone else.

    I guess it definitely fits with the theme of Overlord where a boring but overpowered character goes around killing a bunch of much more interesting side characters, but I wouldn't really call that a good thing.

    I'm not sure I'd even call Gilgamesh particularly in character. He's made even more bland, "kill all the mongrels" than he normally is.

    1/5 would not recommend
     
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