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MENTOR Voldemort? (non-slash!)

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by xvector, Sep 23, 2014.

  1. xvector

    xvector Second Year

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    Hi all,

    Looking for some Mentor Voldemort stories, preferably darkish in nature. Was reading "A Stranger in an Unholy Land" and I was intrigued by the idea of Voldemort actually mentoring, and in his own way, caring about Harry (not in a romantic way!)

    Does anyone know any novel-length (~30k+) or longer fics in which Harry has a Mentor Voldemort? The more AU, the better.

    I've seen "Prince of the Dark Kingdom" in the forums and in my searches, but looking for a fic where Harry doesn't have as much animosity back towards Voldemort for whatever reasons.
     
  2. Odran

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  4. Knoq

    Knoq Temporarily Banhammered

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    Nah, I really have to say this.

    Prince of a Dark Kingdom is probably the best one out there, and I miss the days I spent reading it the first go through. Its fucking wonderful reading a fic that rich and long without waiting for updates. You stay immersed all the way through.

    Ice Crux....man I tried to read it but couldn't it was just...I dunno, too unreadable. Ah I remember now, it smacked of Fandom!PermaVillain Voldemort. I have to agree with a certain fanfic author in that extracting Voldemort's motivations and personalities from the times he was at his most desperate/punishing truly monumental fuck-ups is kind of the wrong way to go. Even if to some extent, JK Rowling did something similar. Although TBH, most of the time Voldemort outright flipped his goddamned shit....its fairly easy to sympathize. He mostly deserved what pissed him off but still. The fandom's oddity of Voldemort being a overly torture happy control freak is odd, and to some extent actually conflicts with Canon.

    I recommended those stories by Brigade though. Try them out. But really, PoaDK is quite possibly the best of this type, if not one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions ever written. Read it, and stay with it, its over a million words and well worth it.

    I however, would like to politely hijack your thread for a related interest:Any fics out there where Voldemort/Tom Riddle ends up actually getting the DADA job by Dumbledore hiring him? And say, keeping it for the next several decades or so, putting his other plans on a long-term backburner/keeping things to targeted assassinations and such?
     
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  5. xvector

    xvector Second Year

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    Thanks! Of course, I'll continue to read Prince of a Dark Kingdom. But I will finish it, eventually, and this is why I am looking for other fics of a similar nature.

    Thanks for the suggestions so far. Any others?
     
  6. blizzarrrd

    blizzarrrd Fourth Year

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    The only thing that comes to my mind is "Rectifier" by Niger Aquila. FanFiction.Net A different Tom Riddle, one who is DADA teacher, comes to the canon Universe and encounters Voldemort, Dumbledore etc.
     
  7. gbbz

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    You want a Mentor Voldemort story? This is the ultimate:
    The Manipulator

    He just wants you to love him.
     
  8. Odran

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    That seems... interesting. What happened to Ron and Hermione? How did Voldemort win in the first place? Is any of this elaborated in the fic?
     
  9. gbbz

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    Not really, at least I don't remember the fic mentioning it. I think they died...

    EDIT: I haven't read it for ages, last (and only) time was in 2010
     
  10. Odran

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    Yeah, I'll skip this shit. Harry has been, for some reason, de-aged and that bothers me to no end. Not to mention the whole treating him like a pet behavior from Voldemort, stroking his hair or kissing him on the forehead. This is obviously gonna end up in slash, no matter what the author claims.
     
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  11. gbbz

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    The whole point is it not being slash, despite the overtones and Harry's struggle as a single sane man in the land of lunatics.
     
  12. Odran

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    He doesn't have to put his dick in his ass to make it slash, it's obvious enough. And the whole de-aging thing just gives it an extra pedophile vibe.
     
  13. sirius009

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    I just finished "Enveloped in Darkness" and it's one of the better ones out there and has some really original ideas, not all of them are great but they are original and the writing's solid.
     
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    This thread has grabbed my interest and I am looking for odd Tom Riddle fics as well.

    I agree with the OP's sentiments. The more AU the better, indeed.

    Sadly I do not know any other than Prince of a Dark Kingdom.

    There was this one story I read ages ago which featured Draco being friendly to Harry as Harry was being groomed in Voldemort's camp. I think he refused to join Voldemort and I forgot how it ended. But I read through a few chapters again a short while back and it was horriblelicious.

    Now I've been looking for ages and can't find it. Found it. It's called Harry Potter and the Slytherin Connection by KrystalRoze. Somewhere in that entire series is a scene where Draco Malfoy goes to talk to Harry in a tent while he's in Voldemort's custody and they get along fine. I think Harry learns about how Voldemort thinks there.

    It was the first story I read that presented Malfoy as something other than a stupid villain.

    As a character I think he has a lot of potential. I particularly liked Kwan Li's, Harry Potter and the Boy Who Lived.

    Thinking back on it that story featured a villainous Voldemort who just wanted to control Harry and it is kind of unreadable. It was a pain to look at it and see what my taste was like when I started reading fanfiction years ago.

    Sadly I still like a lot of shit stories.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/u/426481/KrystalRoze

    The most memorable scene from that kind of mentor soul bonded Voldemort with Harry fic. At least it's the most memorable for me. The scene is near the end of the chapter. Although all of it can be considered a conversation.
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2021674/8/Harry-Potter-and-the-Trelawney-Prophecy

    If you get engaged read all of it. It is unbelievable what happens but it is entertaining.
     
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    Hah, yeah. Time flies, holy shit.

    Anyway, that story sucks at the start, so if you can get over it then it'll be fine.
     
  18. xvector

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    Thanks for all the help here! I'll be sure to read through these.
     
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    I am suddenly overcome with butthurt that Something Lost, Something Found lies untouched since 2011.

    Heh.
     
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    Well, not untouched. Just unpublished/un-updated.
     
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