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My Sword, My love, My destiny by GKnights - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by sirius009, May 24, 2006.

  1. sirius009

    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    Title: My sword, My love, My destiny
    Author: G-K-N-I-G-H-T-S
    Genre: Romance/Action adventure
    Pairing: h/gabby
    Rating: T
    Summary: Harry's older brother, Godric, is the boy who lived, At the age of 8 Harry ran away from the dark house of abuse and neglect. At a house beside the lake he met her, Gabrielle Delacour, the same age as him. Sorted into Merlin House of Honor. Harry and Gabi
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2952262/1/
    Alright only one chapter and is pretty choppy, the only reason i'm even posting the link here is because i would hate to a h/gabby ship not get some feedback. I've talked to the author and he is removing the mating thing while considering what to do w/ the "house of merlin" thing. By the way, how do you get a link to work in this new format??
     
  2. Shuujaku

    Shuujaku Fourth Year

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    We don't have much information from Gabrielle, even from canon. Removing the one issue (age) from the story kills a lot of the possible relationship dynamic.

    Now factor in 'mating' and 'mediocre writing' and you have a story that rivals the H/Ginny stories that make me lose interest in the fandom. =/
     
  3. Zilly Sawdust

    Zilly Sawdust High Inquisitor

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    The pairing is quite unique since there aren't many H/Gabie stories out there, but the run-away-because-of-abuse-by-parents!Harry is a little cliche along with sibling-is-boy-who-lived. The fact that Gab doesn't have any background story makes her something like an OC with a name from cannon. The story in itself is a bit rushed and has some mistakes with tenses. The elemental part is atleast originally incorporated, not like 'Merlin descended from the Heavens and said: "You are my heir and also Heir of Slytherin, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor and Ravenclaw and you're an elemental and you're basically a demi-god"' or something like that. But even with all that stuff I've listed I'm waiting for an update, maybe because of the pairing or maybe because I sometimes like reading cliches for the fun of it :p
     
  4. Randeemy

    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    I cant stand fics where Lily and James abuse Harry. They really annoy me...
     
  5. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    I'll reserve my judgement till more chapters come about.
     
  6. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    And another one bites the dust.

    Unfortunately I seem to have missed this one and I do not know where to find another copy. It's gone.

    --bornagainpenguin
     
  7. Nytmare

    Nytmare Fourth Year

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    another NECRO!!!
    the stalker is here!
     
  8. Goddessa39

    Goddessa39 DA Member

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    Where'd it go???

    I can't find this story either..... grrr
     
  9. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Well this story is also gone, up for deletion.
     
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