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WIP Naruto Genkyouien by Daneel Rush - M - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Kensington, Dec 19, 2008.

  1. Kensington

    Kensington Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Title: Naruto Genkyouien
    Author: Daneel Rush
    Rating: N/A
    Pairing: Naruto/OC
    Chapters: 62 (ff.net)
    Words: 693,152
    Updated: Jan 31, 2015
    Published: Dec 21, 2008
    Status: Complete

    Summary: (Author doesn't provide one so I'm writing it) When Naruto gets tossed off the cliff during his training with Jiraiya he meets the Kyuubi. Too bad she has the mentality of a two year old.

    “I WAS JUST CHASING MAH TAILS!”

    Link: The Fanfiction Forums (restricted access)
    More chapters can be found here: The Fanfiction Forums (restricted access)

    Fanfiction.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4730390/1/
    Summary: The nine-tailed demon fox. Its mighty tails can crumble mountains, cause tsunamis, and set things on fire. Lots of fire. It might have been better if she actually were an evil entity bent on destroying the world. Yes, she. AU pseudo-x-over.


    Checked: April 13, 2015
     
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  2. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Crack-fic. Insanity.

    It was funny for a while, but then it just got old. I'd have to say 3/5, 'cause I laughed a bit at the beginning.
     
  3. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Crappy summary 1/5.
     
  4. goldenwolfeye

    goldenwolfeye Seventh Year

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    I don't think this was the original summary used when the story was still on FF.net. And The one on TFF does not have a summary.

    I very much like it, especially the new plot twist.
    5/5
     
  5. Ksai

    Ksai Third Year

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    Mkay.

    How can I enter this forum?:p

    As far as I understood - you need to get an invitation. And just registering an account there wont work.
     
  6. Janus

    Janus Groundskeeper

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    You should just be able to register.

    D= Kensington! Proper thread title format dammit.

    -,- I miss Fuujinroku, Genkyouien is clearly better for Daneel's soul after Gospel but...
     
  7. Kensington

    Kensington Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Oops, what did I miss? I thought I was proper.
     
  8. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    :awesome

    Try again Einstein, you might understand this time.
     
  9. Knox

    Knox The Last Remnant DLP Supporter

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    The fic was lulz for like five or so chapters then it became meh. Then the author deleted it off of FFn and moved it to The fail factory and as the site would suggest it became fail. ;)
     
  10. Esus

    Esus First Year

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    I agree, it was hilarious with lots of LOL moments for the first half, but eventually the jokes got old. Especially the fact that this Naruto seems to be retarded talking in one word replies of "huh" and "wha-" more often than not near the end.
     
  11. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Now for the real summary;
     
  12. Inquisition

    Inquisition Canadian Ambassador to Japan DLP Supporter

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    Jon hardcore-lurves this story.

    Less internet memes and this'd be better, but still a not bad read.

    4/5.
     
  13. Robo Jesus

    Robo Jesus High Inquisitor

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    Just a note, while the chapters at the The Fanfiction Forums are up to twelve (last I checked), the author has finally decided to put the story back up on FF.net, though it's only at chapter three atm there.

    Here is the fanfiction.net link btw.
     
  14. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I quite enjoyed this story at the start. Then I got bored. Though some of the dry-humping and nearly-smut has made me crack a smile or two in later chapters, it doesn't save it.

    Also, internet memes have no place in a story.
     
  15. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    But the Yuri! The Yuri! You wouldn't take away my Yuri would you?
     
  16. Satan

    Satan Third Year

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    The first part of the story finished at chapter 53 if anyone wants to check it out, although it's still continuing.

    It's got some interesting concepts and along with the curveball thrown in the most recent chapter (58.).
     
  17. Clerith

    Clerith Ahegao Emperor ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I remember reading this waay back, and then starting at a random point after it started getting uploaded on FFN again recently. This fic is so weird. I like and dislike it at the same time.

    I can never differentiate between the fox girls. Most of them are basically the same to me.

    I think the quality is pretty high, but it takes a certain type of a person to enjoy this type of a fic. You know, someone who browses anime fanfiction forums and likes memes.

    Like Syao said, the dry humping is pretty lulzy at times.

    The fic also has some really heavy and deep stuff at times, and the mythos can get way overdone at times. The author likes overly complex world systems. Oh, and naturally it's basically massive AU filled with OCs. Has to be able to stomach that. It's also kinda hard to get into...

    I've been reading the past what, 15 chapters, and I probably skipped something like at least 10 in the middle. Didn't feel like I missed anything important. The plot moves incredibly slowly, but that's not really what the fic is about. Naruto's growth is also sloo~~ow, but something has happened after all these words. Mostly shown in the past few chapters. I kinda like it.

    The "curveball" at the end of the latest chapter was one of the most distasteful and annoying things I've ever read in this fic. Ugh.

    I think overall this deserves a 4/5 from me, but it's really, really, really YYMV.
     
  18. Crimson13

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    I agree, I like it but at the same time when I see it updated I rub my forehead and go 'Uggggh.'. There's a lot of characters and it's hard to keep track of them all and some feel the same, which makes it even harder to remember which one is which.
     
  19. Darth Disaster

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    58 chapters of meh with the occasional laugh, all centered around a Brat!Naruto who grates on the nerves.

    3/5
     
  20. Satan

    Satan Third Year

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    I think your reading comprehension just sucks if that's what you got from the story.
     
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