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Complete No Dawn, No Day by quipquipquip - M - Batman

Discussion in 'Anime, Cartoons, and Comics' started by frodrick, Aug 11, 2011.

  1. frodrick

    frodrick Slug Club Member

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    Title: No Dawn, No Day
    Author: quipquipquip
    Rating: M
    Genre: Romance/Drama
    DLP Category: Other Fandoms/Batman
    Pairing: Stephanie Brown/Damian Wayne
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Living, you're allelopathic. Everything around you withers up and dies-and that's not your fault. You got that from your father. It's a shame, really. Damian/Stephanie, future AU based on Batman 666/700
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7141134/1/No_Dawn_No_Day

    A dramatic futurefic focusing on Damian and Stephanie Brown 8 years after the "current" DCU date.

    This is one of the best written fics I've read. There are some humorous moments, but the drama and emotion throughout the whole thing remains top notch...at least, I thought so, until the ending. Which made the whole fic look shabby by comparison.
     
  2. Kraken

    Kraken Sixth Year

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    Overall an excellent fic. The main problem for me was the time skips. In particular, the ending was too abrupt. I didn't have any problem with the content of the ending but the way it was just suddenly dropped on the reader was poorly done. 4/5 from me
     
  3. Anya

    Anya Harley Quinn DLP Supporter

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    That was so great. Just..... my favourite Batman story I've read.

    I would have liked more Jason interaction. But overall it was good, good enough for me to scream MOAR!!!
     
    Last edited: Aug 21, 2011
  4. frodrick

    frodrick Slug Club Member

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    Last edited: Aug 24, 2011
  5. Kang

    Kang Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Freaking win but weaksauce ending = 4.99999/5
     
  6. Kraken

    Kraken Sixth Year

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    The timeline frodrick posted sort of has an alternate ending/continuation if you want. Personally, I though it was suitable. We see the trigger for Damian turning into a full-on Killer!Batman in the future.
     
  7. frodrick

    frodrick Slug Club Member

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    Though I was the one who posted the expanded version/alt ending, I actually like the original much better. It was more real, and kept more with the overall tone of the fic.

    That being said, Pink Kryptonite made me lol.
     
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