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Oneshot No More Heroes: Desperate Struggle - M - by zigCARNIVOROUS

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Drisful, May 31, 2015.

  1. Drisful

    Drisful DA Member DLP Supporter

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    Title (and fandom): No More Heroes: Desperate Struggle
    Author: zigCARNIVOROUS
    Rating: M
    Genre: Action
    Pairing: Travis/Sylvia
    Status: Complete/One-shot
    Summary:
    I remembered this fic the other day, and thought that it might be a good fit for the library. It's fast paced, well written, and very in character. If I had to list any con, it'd be that there are a few typos in the final scene that took me out for a few seconds to try to figure them out. This franchise isn't exactly popular but there's a fair bit of recollecting in the beginning to ease anyone unfamiliar with the series in.
    That said, I'd give it a 4.5/5 out of five rounded up. If it was a little neater it'd be an easy five.
     
    Last edited: May 31, 2015
  2. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Bumped to gain attention:

    As this story got only two votes and no reviews I'll give it another week (until Sunday) before I moved it.
     
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