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Dead Link Probabilities of Love by Zaywex - T - Death Note

Discussion in 'Anime, Cartoons, and Comics' started by DarkAizen, Apr 23, 2009.

  1. DarkAizen

    DarkAizen Professor DLP Supporter

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    Title: Probabilities of Love
    Author:Zaywex
    Category: General/Adventure
    Ratings: T
    Pairings: NONE ( Except Misa forcing someone else to be her boyfriend)
    Summary:What if Jealous had set eyes on another human? What if Ryuk had dropped the note somewhere else?
    Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4722813/1/Probabilities_of_Love

    So, the basic idea is that Jealous fals in love with Light instead of Misa and Ryuk chooses Misa instead of Light.

    It`s a little short for now, the author is getting used to writing and the last chapters are a little rushed. Despite the lenght, the flow is nice and a little funny. And the most important thing is NO SLASH!

    It`s hard to find a decent DN story without L x Light action.

    4/5 from me.
     
    Last edited: Apr 23, 2009
  2. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    It started off well, but towards the later chapters it just started feeling...disjointed and rushed. The characterisation was also butchered in those chapters as well.

    3/5
     
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