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Oneshot Redemption by silentclock - T

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Carmine, Jul 16, 2011.

  1. Carmine

    Carmine Unspeakable

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    Title: Redemption
    Author: silentclock
    Rating: T
    DLP Category: ...General?
    Pairing: None
    Words: 2,951
    Published: August 16, 2010

    Status: Oneshot
    Summary: Take a look inside the mind of the Dark Lord as he recalls his past and considers his own morality. Can Lord Voldemort be redeemed?
    Link: FF.net - WbA

    I read this a while ago and particularly enjoyed it, and happened to end up rereading it earlier today. I searched around DLP, and am relatively certain it hasn't been put up For Review. If I'm wrong, feel free to eviscerate me.

    I give this a 5/5, for great character development throughout, as that's the exclusive focus of the story. I normally wouldn't particularly appreciate a story so light on action, but I personally found this awesome.


    Checked by Minion, January 15, 2013
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Jan 15, 2013
  2. Stalin's Pipe Organs

    Stalin's Pipe Organs Auror

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    4/5

    I get what this fic is trying to achieve and it deserves the library. But it could have been way better.
     
  3. Infidel

    Infidel Auror

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    4/5

    A well written story. Almost makes me feel sad for Voldemort.
     
  4. Hesperion

    Hesperion Squib

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    I agree. it read very well, but just didn't have that x-factor to make it really stand out to me.

    4/5
     
  5. KingRoger

    KingRoger Second Year

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    A beautifully written story, but it feels like it tries to leave too much to the reader's imagination, leaving out things that would truly add to the piece. 4/5
     
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