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Oneshot Release by Antosha - NC17 (One Shot HP/LL)

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Cathal, Jan 9, 2008.

  1. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    Title: Release
    Author: Antosha
    Rating: NC-17
    Genre: PWP/Romance/Humor
    DLP Category: Restricted Section
    Pairing: Harry/Luna
    Status: Complete, Oneshot
    Summary: Harry desperately needs to find a release from angst and sorrow. On the top of Stoatshead Hill, he discovers that Luna Lovegood has some very funny ideas about how to help. Post-OotP.
    Link: http://restrictedsection.org/file.php?file=2655

    I just realized that DLP's library is missing "Release". Lets fix it.
    This story is one of the funniest PWPs I've ever read. I liked Antosha's writing and Luna was... well, she was Luna. Oh, and don't mind Ginny at the beginning of the fic, she won't bother you for too long.
    Give it a try.


    Checked: July 24, 2012
     
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  2. malaga

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    You mean, he had Luna with him... and thought about Ginny??!!

    Luna was well written, but the end just let it down really. 3/5
     
  3. PsyckoSama

    PsyckoSama Groundskeeper

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    "I'm with Crazy Hotness, but I'll think about the Great Red Whore."
     
  4. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    Eh, nothing is perfect...
     
  5. Darius

    Darius 13/m/box

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    ...Log in sites ftfl. >_>
     
  6. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    Fuck that shit. Someone gave it 1/5 and didn't even write why... The same thing happened to a couple of other stories I recommended here. Does it happened to everyone or someone simply dislikes me here?
     
  7. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Too much angst for me. The writing was quite good however, so I give it3/5.
     
  8. Krull

    Krull Denarii Host

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    Stop being a bitch. Maybe someone just didn't like the story?

    It couldn't be that, right?

    EDIT: And I'm curious what logic you used to determine someone gave it a 1/5?
     
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  9. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    I'm OK with people not liking the story. It's not like I wrote it and I do have a weird taste for stories. It's just that if someone gives a story such a low mark he/she needs to, at least, explain why they think the fic is shit. Or at least it's my fucked up logic. I always was a weirdo.
    Simple mathematics. I have an average of 4 votes and I know what the three votes are. It isn't that hard to figure out what the fourth one is.
     
  10. Helius

    Helius Third Year

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    Bugmenot FTW!
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I read this story... I don't know how long ago. I can't honestly remember the first time I read it.

    Anyway, it's pretty amusing and has it's fair share of lulz. Well written, too. Good pairing. Ect, ect.

    It could of did without the Harry/Ginny and... was it Luna/Neville? Come on, that pairing is horrible, even if it's only mildly implied or mentioned.

    Also, thinking about Ron and Hermione doing stuff together with Harry smelling it... I nearly laughed myself silly, as well as vomit a the same time.

    Alright story but the implied shit ruins a lot of it.
     
  12. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    Luna/Ron :wall:
    Yeah, I know, implied pairings make me sick too, that's why I'm not posting it's sequel here.
     
  13. MellowYellow

    MellowYellow Fourth Year DLP Supporter

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    WTF he was having sex with Luna he was think of Ginny.
    Is it just me or is that fucking pathetic?
     
  14. Subcomandante_Taco

    Subcomandante_Taco Seventh Year

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    Well if you look at the posts above, pretty much everybody has already agreed with that. Also, you should go ahead and introduce yourself in the Introduction section.
     
  15. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    I like it a lot. It has a good feel to it. And honestly, I couldn't give a fuck about the H/G at the end.

    Though right after shagging some other girl isn't exactly the best time to confess your feelings. Seriously, he probably smells pretty funky. Take a shower Romeo.

    4.5/5
     
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  16. Alexx of Arabia

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    Another Harry/Luna fic where the link isn't working. Does anyone have a copy?

    Man its sad to find interesting stories in old threads only for their links to not work.
     
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  18. Alexx of Arabia

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    Thank you. Do you by chance have a copy of Back to the Garden by Antosha. I couldn't find it in the library archive.

    https://forums.darklordpotter.net/threads/back-to-the-garden-by-antosha-nc17.19237/

    Edit : Its on ao3. Found it
     
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