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Abandoned Remembrance and Renewal by Avatar Arkmage and Nigel T - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by realmess, Oct 1, 2005.

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When you see Severitus do you:

  1. click on the link hoping it will be a good one.

    82.5%
  2. click on the link just for the heckof it.

    1.0%
  3. click on the link silently preparing you chosen item of kitchenware.

    5.0%
  4. what? how did it end up on my search page? begone!

    11.5%
  1. realmess

    realmess Slug Club Member

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    Title: Remembrance and Renewal
    Author: Avatar Arkmage and Nigel T
    Rating: T
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Angst
    Pairing: the authors put none
    Status: WIP
    Summary: When the negligence of the Dursleys nearly leads to Harry's
    death, his disembodied form wanders, and learns truths about Severus
    Snape, his true biological father. Can they unite against a common foe, or
    do their wounds run too deep? No pairings. Severitus
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2599403/1/

    There are two reasons why I'm posting another Severitus:
    1) I think this fiction is good, even if it's a bit fluffy at times. It used to have [I think] 60something chapters, but miraculously got deleted for...being a [watch out people, this is a new one] "non-story". I can personally assure that it is a story, even if we have Cho taking care of Harry at one point;

    2) just saw the post about MidNknight [was it?], and remembering his strong dislike/dissapointment in all stories sevitus, wanted to give him an opportunity to rant some more. Mid as long as you won't call it a 'non-story' you can trash it to your heart content. :twisted:
     
  2. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Watch the anti-Cho comments. Just because I haven't yet jammed anybody's hand into the food processor doesn't mean that I won't. :p

    I've been reading this one for awhile, though I would prefer that the Harry/Cho relationship be more than just platonic. Not going to happen, though, as the authors are always harping about how they like Cho portrayed in ways other than somebody's love interest. Still a good fic though, and another of the few examples of Seviritus done well.
     
  3. realmess

    realmess Slug Club Member

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    :twisted: *smirks* I actually like the moment when they went to fly on a broom, and had to land abruptly.*smirk*['kittens', you know what I'm talking about] I'm not a great fan of H/Cho, but what I meant was that there are no pairings, even though there was a potential for Harry/Cho.
    Besides I can jam your food processor with my grapefruit spoon. HA!
     
  4. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Re: Remembrance and Renewal by Avatar Arkmage and Nigel T R-

    rofl. (laughs while trying to figure out why the hell people/that person think I rant when I post mostly the same stuff everyone else does damnit! Not my fault is most agree with me!)

    I'll read this when I get home, my phones acting up and not wanting to display the whole thing. From what little bit I skimmed, it looks like it'd be a good basis for another serious story.
     
  5. realmess

    realmess Slug Club Member

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    :twisted: rant/trash/eulogize/praise whatever :)
    rant-ment as in expressing extreme dislike of the subject, or as http://www.answers.com/rant define it:To speak or write in a angry or violent manner; rave.
     
  6. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    ...

    Rocks fall, Everyone dies.



    May or may not have been acceptable when initially posted, but not DLP material by current standards.

    2/5
     
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