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WIP Ruinous by gabriel blessing - M - (Kim Possible)

Discussion in 'Anime, Cartoons, and Comics' started by Jormungandr, Dec 16, 2010.

  1. Jormungandr

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    Title: Ruinous.
    Author: gabriel blessing.
    Rating: M.
    Genre: Adventure/Supernatural
    DLP Category: Crossover/Alternate Universe.
    Pairing: Eventually Kimberly Ann Possible/Ronald Stoppable, initially Erik/Kimberly Ann Possible and stag Ronald Dean Stoppable.
    Status: Work in Progress.
    Summary: Temptation of the flesh and the spirit. That which lies beneath, that which lies beyond. The ruinous powers of Chaos call, and those who hear respond. If, that is, they can manage to find a date to Junior Prom...
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5800431/1/Ruinous

    This is a dramatic A/U spin off from the Kim Possible season III finale movie, "So The Drama."

    Okay, often horrific errors with spelling/syntax aside, this is pretty good stuff: the characterizations on both the existing characters (Kim and Ron) are spot on for the series time-frame set (when they're both just working out their feelings from 'best friend' to 'love interest'), and where Kim's dating Erik, and the new, original characters that he's brought in are pretty deep and well developed. Their interaction with Ron and his hidden past are pretty captivating, just giving the reader just enough hints to make him or her want to rush straight to the next chapter.

    Although this does use the Chaos Gods from Warhammer, it's not a Warhammer or Warhammer 40K crossover - the fictional element is merely used/'borrowed', and they have an independent (though similar) origin to the canon Warhammer gods.

    It hasn't been updated for 7 months, now, but the author is active and writing other things, and it's likely that he'll come back to it soon; he rarely leaves a story unfinished.

    Give it a shot! 4/5.
     
  2. Mercenary

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    hmm im pretty sure he writes almost all of his fics in advance...
     
  3. Jormungandr

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    I daresay that a copy or work in progress incarnation of the next chapter is on his hard-drive somewhere; just need to wait for him to polish and publish it.

    He also mentioned 'The Door of Air' having a new chapter in the works, but that was months ago, too.
     
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