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Complete Slither Hither by Jessica X - NC17 - HP/PP

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Zevrillion, May 25, 2005.

  1. Warlocke

    Warlocke Fourth Champion

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    Then my work here is done. The world needs more good Harry/Pansy stories (that friggin' continue to completion instead of being abandoned).
     
  2. Drachna

    Drachna Slug Club Member

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    Hmm... Pansy and Harry are obviously both extremely out of character, the actual smut is pretty poor, and the dialogue is terrible. I'd give this a 2/5 I think.