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WIP The Confederate by Toasterman - W40K/Starcraft

Discussion in 'Games' started by Kraken, Apr 4, 2010.

  1. Kraken

    Kraken Sixth Year

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    Title: The Confederate
    Author: Toasterman
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Humor
    Category: W40K/Starcraft
    Status: WIP
    Summary: In the 41st millennium, the Imperium of Man is besieged on all sides by aliens, heretics and mutants. Mankind faces extinction alone, its people pray for salvation. Heeding the call, the Emperor has sent...well, the best he could get on such short notice.

    This is an extremely enjoyable fic. It takes a space marine from the Starcraft Terrans and throws him onto an Imperial world being attacked by Orks. From there, hilarity ensues along with some well written fight scenes and slightly ridiculous plot twists.

    5/5
     
  2. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I lasted to the end of the first story arc, chapter 9. I don't care enough about any of the characters to bother continuing with it.
     
  3. Chengar Qordath

    Chengar Qordath The Final Pony ~ Prestige ~

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    I found it reasonably entertaining with some some nice humorous moments. Not the best fic I've ever read, but it was good enough to keep me interested, and the update rate seems pretty solid.
     
  4. ZeroTheDestroyer

    ZeroTheDestroyer Auror

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    I approve. Now find me another fic like this! We're on a roll this month. Ladies, Ladies, Ladies and the Marine/warcraft fic are some of the funniest stories I've read all year.
     
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