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Abandoned The Dimension Shift by DreamRed - M

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by DreamRed, Dec 30, 2006.

  1. DreamRed

    DreamRed Seventh Year

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    Title: The Dimension Shift
    Author: DreamRed
    Rating: M
    Chapters: 10
    Words: 85,121 (ff.net)
    Updated: January 20, 2009
    Published: December 2, 2006
    Status: Abandoned

    Suggested Category: Independent or Dark Arts
    Pairing: Harry Potter/Su Li
    Summary: An accident in the Department of Mysteries forces Harry fourteen years into the future where he finds himself trapped in the middle of four warring factions in a much changed Wizarding World.
    Links: FF.net DLP

    I've posted this in 'Work by Author' section, and I'll continue to post there for feedback. The basic premise is that Harry is sent forwards in time, rather than the typical back in time thing, and gradually hardens and comes into his own.

    Edit: Fixed the FF.net link.



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  2. Moloch

    Moloch Groundskeeper

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    I'm too damned lazy to check, so ether, ff.net's down again, the story got pulled, or you posted a faulty link. DLP one works fine though.

    EDIT: I like it. Its fresh, original and not eye bleeding. :)
     
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  3. Oujou Akaash

    Oujou Akaash Unspeakable

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    The story is aswem. I'm still waiting for chapter 4.
     
  4. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Its different which is good. So Tonks cut ties with Dumbledore. The only thing I sorta dont like is how Dumbledore seems to know everything except when and where Harry will appear. I say its above average. While not the best its definitly not the worst.

    Now update.
     
  5. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Wow.... This is good. Now where's that chapter?! 4.5/5
     
  6. Brooklynight

    Brooklynight Seventh Year

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    I like it, its definitely holding my interest. 4.5/5
     
  7. Swimdraconian

    Swimdraconian Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    This is a very different take on what the future could be than most 'time travel' fics out there. Good and original. 5/5
     
  8. KubYnator

    KubYnator Second Year

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    Awesome Fic. Easily one of the best time travel and in my opinion the best Harry goes to the future.
    5/5
     
  9. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Good story. Nice job :)
     
  10. The_Banisher

    The_Banisher First Year

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    It's been interesting so far. I enjoy the plot line and the writing itself is quite splendid. However it's not the best, so I must rate this as a 4.5/5.
     
  11. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Quite good. 4.5/5.
     
  12. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    Made of win and good, now update!
    4.5/5
     
  13. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    I only read fics that I consider at least a 4/5 and I only review the 4.5/5 or above.

    Its not perfect, but it rocks.

    4.67/5
     
  14. Teal_Thanatos

    Teal_Thanatos First Year

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    Really damned good story. 4.6 out of 5.
     
  15. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    At the moment 4.5/5 but Im gonna leave rating it until after a few more chapters in case something goes HORRIBLY WRONG!!
     
  16. Afiz

    Afiz First Year

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    Impressive.

    Very Impressive.

    Five star plot. Five Star writing.
     
  17. Nytmare

    Nytmare Fourth Year

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    I quite liked this one, good Ideas are hard to come by, so brownie points to you for coming up with a new premise.

    I am also going to withhold rating for now, three chapter's is not enough to judge by.

    Nytmare
     
  18. DreamRed

    DreamRed Seventh Year

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    Updated over on FF.net. There are two chapters there that haven't been posted in the Work By Author forum, if people have missed them. You see a lot more of Bellatrix in this chapter, and I'd be interested to hear people's thoughts on how her character is played out, because whilst I found her fun to write I'm not sure whether I managed to capture that weird fanatical crazy thing going on with her.
     
  19. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Link still ain't working. Little help?
     
  20. DreamRed

    DreamRed Seventh Year

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