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WIP The Leaf's Naruto by Roarian - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Naruto' started by Ilverin, Jun 15, 2015.

  1. Ilverin

    Ilverin First Year

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    Title: The Leaf's Naruto
    Author: Roarian AKA Morta's Priest
    Genre: Time Travel/Adventure
    Rated: Fiction T
    Chapters: 23
    Words: 188,736
    Updated: Feb 14, 2014
    Published: Jun 28, 2012
    Status: WIP
    Fandom: Naruto
    Pairings: N/A

    Summary: There's something to be said for keeping the past as it was - makes it predictable, malleable. Naruto never bought those arguments. He's always been the one to power through adversity rather than wait it out, so why would now be any different? He'll do what has to be done, even if he steps on a few butterflies along the way.

    Links:
    FFN: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8264234/1/The-Leaf-s-Naruto
    DLP WbA: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=22165

    This is a decent time travel story with okay characters and good character interaction.
    Warning: the story has lots of words for not lots of story (story seems to be at most halfway done).

    The premise is that Naruto was never super-fast or physically super-strong, and also, this Naruto grew tired of the 'long way' of accomplishing his goals and decided to learn assassination. In the future, when he doesn't think he can win, he uses a time-travel seal to become a soon-to-graduate academy student.

    Rating:3/5 for the good character interaction
     
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  2. Bramastra

    Bramastra Groundskeeper

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    Isn't this already in here? Well that's surprising
     
  3. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    I always liked this, but it's kinda dead. Where it leaves off doesn't inspire much. I guess it belongs? 4/5
     
  4. Darth Disaster

    Darth Disaster The Waking Sith ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    TLN is freaking fantastic, and definitely deserves a spot in the library. Personally I rate it 5/5, one of the best Fanfics in the genre.


    Now if only it'd update again.
     
  5. Probellum

    Probellum Death Eater

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    Eh, it's not dead, Roarian is just a slacker. Anyway, the fic is easily one of the best timetravel fics, with great characterization and plot twists.

    5/5
     
  6. hmmbot

    hmmbot First Year

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    I look for good naruto stories all the time. I always end up coming back to this one. I am sucker for a story with a time travel premise done well.

    5/5

    Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
     
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