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Complete The Lord of Azkaban by padfootjr24 - R

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Twilight, May 5, 2005.

  1. Twilight

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    Title: The Lord of Azkaban
    Author: padfootjr24
    Rating: M (16+), R
    Genre: General
    Chapters: 4
    Words: 75,711
    Updated: April 23, 2006 (corrected and reposted in 2007)
    Published: February 16, 2005
    Status: Complete

    Ships: HP/BB(L)/NT
    Summary:Harry is sent to Azkaban for murder. Seven years later Dumbledore and others come to release him but what they find is not what they were expecting.

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2267009/1/


    Checked by Minion, June 9, 2013
     
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  2. nightangel960

    nightangel960 Fifth Year

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    finally a story where Harry tells them to shove it.. I love it wish more stories were like this
     
  3. Twilight

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    Yeah its not bad, the only way I can think of what would improve it is more HP/BB/NT interaction.
     
  4. nightangel960

    nightangel960 Fifth Year

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    hey you can always mail the author for ideas on the final part
     
  5. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    it's hot as hell but why add ginny???
     
  6. nightangel960

    nightangel960 Fifth Year

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    you know I really don't know.
     
  7. Twilight

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    Yeah I wish Ginny wasn't part of pairings either but I'm glad she doesn't take too much of the focus of the fic and I dont remember seeing her in the 2nd part...
     
  8. nightangel960

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    she really wasn't in it the second part
     
  9. ChuckDaTruck

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    NEW CHAPTER UP!! :D
     
  10. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    i like what he did to voldemort...i wonder if he'll use kitchenware?
     
  11. ChuckDaTruck

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    He should. Kitchenware is perfect.
     
  12. Midknight

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  13. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Nah, the best was the rejection of Dumbledore right in the first chapter.

    "Ugh! I'm so heart broken! I've fucked everything up and now Harry won't fix it. :cry: "

    I was so happy when I read that. THe first chapter was PERFECT canon Dumbledore. His character couldn't have been better in the first part.
     
  14. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Yeah all Dumbles had to do to be perfect canon would be to mention someone's "withered hand" 102984983207327 times and it'd be just like the old bastard.
     
  15. Dark Syaoran

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    To bad he wasnt given a withered hand in this... LOL!@#~

    I'd cry if i ever see that saying used in a fanfiction more than once.
     
  16. Anonymous

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    I couldn't agree with that statement more if I tried... There are a bunch of phrases like that in Fan Fiction... Makes me want to shoot the authors.

    I like Lord of Azkaban, it is one of the better ones that I have read...
     
  17. Silke

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    It's good though i can't help but feel that the quality of the chapters dropped.
    And Ginny!!!
    WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!?

    Gonna read the epilogue though (secretly hopes Ginny got killed when they were casting the spell).
     
  18. Vecna

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    was pretty good then all of a sudden it ginny just came out of nowhere and it started ot go downhill
     
  19. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Very true. 1 was PERFECT, maybe a little bad with the kids at the end, but eh!!


    2 was VERY GOOD, the commentary during the library scene was ok, some things kind of sucked like Harry still getting pranked and his weird "friendly" relationship with Snape, but still very good!

    3. Was GOOD and that should be it. I wanted a more bad ass Harry like the one from Chapter 1 who just removes Voldemort's magic and lets the rest of the world deal with him. Or kicks the man off the island and just Hides Azkaban from the face of the Earth. and Let's the world go to hell.
     
  20. Anonymous

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    I loved the first chapter and the second, but the third chapter put it over the top for me with that scene:

    Dumbledore: Well, Voldermort is dead. So I guess I can die now (completely absolving myself of any guilt) from these wounds I got from battling him before.

    Harry: Oh no, old man. Your going to live with the consequences of your actions.
     
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