Title: The seven sins of Harry
Author: Flametongue
Rating: T
Genre: Humor/Romance
Pairings: Harry(Lust)/Many
Chapters: 5
Words: 11,930
Updated: January 20, 2008
Published: May 14, 2005
Status: Abandoned
Summary: What happens when Harry stumbled upon an old artefact that splits him into seven different Harrys who all have a personality that resembles a deadly sin? And what happens when 'Lust Harry' begins to hit on the girls?
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2393376/1/

Funny and original. Last chapter wasn't up to scratch, but the rest I found quite brilliant.


The story was taken over and continued by another author - with permission of Flametongue - and quite soon abandoned once more:

Author: thekecmaster
Chapters: 8
Words: 19,353
Updated: May 10, 2008
Published: January 21, 2008
Status: Abandoned
Summary: Harry Potter stumbles upon an ancient artifact and is suddenly split into seven different characters. Each character represents a deadly sin. Chaos now reigns at Hogwarts.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4026459/1/The-Seven-Sins-of-Harry-Potter




Checked by Minion, February 6, 2013
Added Thekecmaster's version

 

Pretty funny... The A/N's everwhere in the story annoy me, as do the
-bleep- 's.

 

pretty funny shit but yeh fuck those A/N's out the way and will be alot easier on the eyes.

 

it's funny...

 

-Pause-

*ROFLMFAO!!!

OMG. I did not expect this at all when I started reading. Cookies to thekecmaster and Flametongue.

I want more please. *Grins

 

...

That's one hell of a bump. Is it still good in today's standards?

 

It was quite amusing, even if the grammar was horrible. Went downstairs after Chapter 4 though.

 

There are several things I could say about this story. It's original, that much is for sure. The first chapter was hilarious I thought. All it needed was Yakety Sax playing in the background. Second chapter was a good one as well. The third chapter was interesting with all the powers, keeping the originality.

Four Chapter, I just thought it was ironic that Flitwick had the Yoda voice considering the actor who plays him in the movie was in the original Star Wars movie.

I have not gone over to the other person to see if they have continued it. However, despite the grammar, and the A/Ns, I do believe this is Library Worthy. It is at least a 3.5/5 and up to 4/5 in my opinion.

 

It is library worthy for the first few chapters alone. 3.5/5