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WIP The Struggles of The Soul Bond by quicksilver7424 - KPLUS

Discussion in 'Review Board' started by quicksilver7424, Mar 13, 2019.

  1. quicksilver7424

    quicksilver7424 Muggle

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    I've only done 2 chapters of a Soul Bond story, and I'm not sure how people feel about that (they probably don't like it). I don't care if you don't like it, and you can talk shit about Soul Bonds, I'm still gonna write it cause all the other Soul Bond stories are terrible People always whine and complain about how their story gets ripped to shreds here and everyone is edgy, that's great. Absolutely annihilate my story, I'm not a pussy. It might be hard with only 2 chapters, but you can follow along as I update if you like it.


    Title: The Struggles of The Soul Bond
    Author: quicksilver7424
    Rating: KPLUS
    Genre: Drama/Friendship
    Status: In-Progress
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    Summary: Harry and Ginny unwillingly develop a Soul Bond and have to live with the struggles of it. Will they ever come around?
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13232769/1/The-Struggles-of-The-Soul-Bond
     
  2. TRH

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  3. Sorrows

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    You are only a few thousand words into your story so posting it on WBA would be a good idea, if you are after detailed feedback. For Review is more about whether a story is good enough to be entered into the library and since you have only got two chapters so far it is very unlikely to meet that bar yet even if the writing were exceptional.

    If you do post in WBA be sure to read the Stickies. Particularly the part about writing a summery using the standard format.
     
  4. Agravaine

    Agravaine Slug Club Member

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    That is one off-putting preface. You blast another story for being too OOC, immediately cop to writing a character OOC, and then get excited about putting a teenage woman "in her place." I mean, I guess that all jives with the tone and content of your intro above, but it sure doesn't make me want to read on.
     
  5. quicksilver7424

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    Yeah you're right, I changed it.


    Do you wanna beta read for me