View Full Version : Flawed Perfection, by SeriousScribble -T (Eragon)
11-19-2008, 02:47 PM
Title: Flawed Perfection
DLP Category: Other Fandoms (Misc)
Status: Work in Progress
Summary: Set after Eldest. He tried to forget her, but found that he couldn't. As Eragon struggles with his feelings and tries to understand Arya, he starts learning more about himself; all the while fighting to save Alagaësia. And there's still one last egg…
11-19-2008, 03:39 PM
I have read this story and I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed it. My opinion is biased due to the fact that I am rooting for Eragon/Arya, but that is unavoidable.
The writing is very good, it flows smoothly. Also, a bonus point for the story is that the romance and discussions with Arya seem natural. Other Eragon/Arya stories that I have read either have crap full angst or turn into
"Eragon I've been thinking and I love you," said Arya, "Wanna be my mate and have hot steamy sex?"
Naturally Eragon, the smooth lover that he is picks her up and gives her the best sex she is ever had.
This story avoids that masterfully, and there is a slow progression of the relation that only leaves you wanting for more.
Excellent: 4.5/5, rounded to 5 because of direct comparison with others.
I updated with chapter 4. It's on ff.net (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4069618/5/Flawed_Perfection) (included there is also a short summary of the last chapters), as well as in the Non-HP WbA (http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?p=287189#post287189) :)
Great stuff. I'd been waiting for the update, and you didn't disappoint.
Basically what Methene said, I love your characterization of Arya. I've skimmed through the Inheritance section of ff.net, and this is undoubtedly the best of the fandom.
Moar, please ?
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