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deathinapinkboa
11-19-2008, 02:47 PM
Title: Flawed Perfection
Author: SeriousScribble
Rating: T
Genre: Adventure/Drama
DLP Category: Other Fandoms (Misc)
Pairing: Eragon/Arya
Chapters: 11
Words: 98,929
Updated: August 16, 2010
Published: February 12, 2008
Status: Abandoned
Summary: Set after Eldest. He tried to forget her, but found that he couldn't. As Eragon struggles with his feelings and tries to understand Arya, he starts learning more about himself; all the while fighting to save Alagaësia. And there's still one last egg…
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4069618/1/Flawed_Perfection


Checked by Minion, August 22, 2013

Methene
11-19-2008, 03:39 PM
I have read this story and I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed it. My opinion is biased due to the fact that I am rooting for Eragon/Arya, but that is unavoidable.

The writing is very good, it flows smoothly. Also, a bonus point for the story is that the romance and discussions with Arya seem natural. Other Eragon/Arya stories that I have read either have crap full angst or turn into

"Eragon I've been thinking and I love you," said Arya, "Wanna be my mate and have hot steamy sex?"

Naturally Eragon, the smooth lover that he is picks her up and gives her the best sex she is ever had.

This story avoids that masterfully, and there is a slow progression of the relation that only leaves you wanting for more.

Excellent: 4.5/5, rounded to 5 because of direct comparison with others.

Sesc
04-06-2009, 12:16 AM
I updated with chapter 4. It's on ff.net (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4069618/5/Flawed_Perfection) (included there is also a short summary of the last chapters), as well as in the Non-HP WbA (http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?p=287189#post287189) :)

JWH
04-09-2009, 01:41 PM
Great stuff. I'd been waiting for the update, and you didn't disappoint.

Basically what Methene said, I love your characterization of Arya. I've skimmed through the Inheritance section of ff.net, and this is undoubtedly the best of the fandom.
4.5/5

Moar, please ?