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I'd like some feedback and possibly ideas

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Gertt, Feb 4, 2009.

  1. Gertt

    Gertt Squib

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    Hi...

    I wasn't really sure if I should post this here or in the for review section, so...

    Well, I've got this idea for a fanfic... In short Harry's gonna go all psycho, team up with Bellatrix and probably become the next Dark Lord. (It's post-OotP.)

    This is the first time I'm seriously writing something that isn't school related, so I'd like to know what you guys think. I can appreciate brutal honesty, but please include some reasoning... Unless you think there's no chance in hell I'd ever improve enough for my writing to be ok. :D Then reasoning would just be a waste of time.

    I showed it to one of my friends and now he says he's scared of me. :( I assume you guys are tougher than him though...

    That said, if you think there's potential, ideas are always welcome and (this is way beyond what I hope to accomplish here but heck) if you'd like to be my beta-reader, I'd like that very much!

    Greets
     

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  2. Rhapsody Belle

    Rhapsody Belle Sixth Year

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    I didn't read this, because I don't click on strange links from people I don't know. Sorry doll, been virus'd a few times, so it's not something I want to risk.

    As for your post itself... any particular reason Harry's going to team up with the woman who killed the only shot he had at getting free of the Dursleys?
     
  3. Gertt

    Gertt Squib

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    Damn you... I just managed to ban that thought from my head! Seriously, there probably won't be any teaming up with Bellatrix. I was just hoping that I'd find a reason for that by the time I got to that point :(

    I think it's a bit long to put directly on the forum, so I'll see what I can do about getting it online somewhere...

    EDIT: Here we go... Does this seem safe enough? Probably not 'cause it's still a strange link... http://gertsallaerts.dommel.be/fanfic/
     
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  4. AntiChrist

    AntiChrist Professor

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    It should be fine to put in the WBA section. That's what its there for basically.
     
  5. Gertt

    Gertt Squib

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    Well, I've started my thread again in the WBA section, so I guess this one should be closed or something?