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Oneshot Creating a family by Saro - M - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Manatheron, Feb 18, 2009.

3/5, 4 votes
  1. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Feb 18, 2009 #1
    Title: Creating a family
    Author: Saro
    Pairing: Itachi/Fem Neji?
    DLP rating: M
    Words: 1,204
    Published: May 8, 2006
    Status: Complete, Oneshot
    Link: Here
    Summery:Uchiha Itachi takes the necessary steps to make the clan he always wanted.

    Comments: Awful, in that 'funny enough to laugh at' parody way. I don't honestly expect it to get a very high rating, but it did make me chuckle so I thought I'd share it.


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  2. AntiChrist

    AntiChrist Professor

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    Feb 18, 2009 #2
    It was briefly amusing and a bit out there, but besides that, it really was nothing special. Grammar was decent and it's good enough as a short one shot. 3/5
     
  3. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Feb 18, 2009 #3
    Brief short and written in away to imply a parade which is good enough for me.


    Also read it before. 3/5
     
  4. ZeroTheDestroyer

    ZeroTheDestroyer Auror

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    Feb 18, 2009 #4
    Know what you mean, kept me entertained for a good few minutes 3.7 for sure. Too bad there are no decimals on the voting chart.
     
  5. Dethklok

    Dethklok Order Member

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    Feb 18, 2009 #5
    This fic proves Itachi is a fucking maniac.

    Just how I like it.