Hatal Fart Attack by Corwalch - K+

[Lutris Argutiae]

Title: Hatal Fart Attack
Author: Corwalch
Rating: K+
Summary: This is in response to a plot bunnie on how to give Vernon Dursley a heart attack. Rating to be on safe side. This story is a one shot and complete.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2814791/1/
Status: Complete, One-Shot.

Highly amusing. not laugh-out-loud material though.

[nonjon]

I read this one a few weeks ago. Really funny idea. Mildly funny execution. Enjoyable, but I think it could have been either more humorous or more... fluffy and WAFFy-ish. Seemed sort of middle of the road on those two and coming up short on both of them.

Frankly, not enough farting considering the play on words in the title.

[Niffler Lord]

Donno about this one. Its seems too long and windy. Tell you the truth I didn't find it funny at all.

But I did like the idea. This would make a good long term fic to see how different Harry is being a ward of the crown. Not so good as a one shot though.

[Rukri]

I liked this story. a little slow but pretty good but it's just sitting there begging for another chapter heh. Could make a pretty good story with that begining

My 2 cents (canadian money too hehe)

[darklordmike]

Just giving some attention to this 'neglected' story.

It was okay, but not really funny at all. The title implies that this is going to be a humorous piece, but there's almost no humor unless you think it's funny to watch the Dursley's squirm in front of the Queen.

The premise is just a little too contrived. The royal princes encountering Dudley Dursley on a playground in Surrey? No way.

3/5 because the writing is solid.