Title: Hear Me Roar!
Author: GERGE
Rating: T
Pairing: None
Summary: When Naruto goes back in time to save the world from the Kyuubi vessel, he finds himself in strange world where he is the vessel! Not a slash, Shikamaru and Naruto are the guys whose points of view I am using.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5736635/1/Hear_Me_Roar

I know there are many time travel stories out there. But I tried to make something a little different.

Let me know what you think about the concept.

 

I found your writing style to be crappy.

 

Ahhh... There's nothing in the world that can compare to DLPers sincerity.

So far we have nothing to judge, write moar and post it on Work by Author if you want any constructive criticism.

While on the subject: Au-Namikaze "I'll kill the kyuubi vessel" Naruto allowing people to hit him in the stomach? Just... No.

Also, I never understood this japanese thing with girls hitting boys on mangas. If some girl start bitch slapping me for no reason, I'll make sure to stay the fuck away from that psycho.

 

What meager bit of writing available is poorly written, and at times incomprehensible. If you can't even use spellcheck, then anything I say is going to be outside your realm of comprehension, so I won't go into detail.

Fail/5