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Complete Obsessive Lily Disorder by Procrastinator-starting2moro - T

Discussion in 'Romance' started by Crazy1, Apr 12, 2006.

  1. Crazy1

    Crazy1 Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    Title - Obsessive Lly Disorder
    Author - Procrastinator-starting2moro
    Rating - T
    Ships - James/Lily, Lily/ OMC
    Chapters: 23
    Words: 144,021
    Updated: October 29, 2005
    Published: June 7, 2005
    Status: Complete

    Summary - James worships the ground Lily, er, throws him on? Includes James Potter stalking, polyjuice potion, Marauder rambling, and Prongs suicidal acts such as drowning in toilet bowls because Apple Of His Eye Evans hates his guts. Or does she?
    Link - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2427170/1/

    The Sirius in this story is so funny, he still acts like a man whore but the girls don't listen to him. The only problem I have with it is that Peter is still alive.
    The sequel has been posted and it's a bit darker and somewhat influenced by :hbp, still lots of humour though




    A sequel can be found here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2647305/1/You-give-me-heart-palpitations


    Checked by Minion, Nov. 18, 2012
    Checked By Sorrows: 03/08/2019
     
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  2. Element

    Element Seventh Year

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    Link, please?
    And whats wrong with Peter still being alive? It sticks to canon, and isn't like many MWPP-era fics where Peter is never mentioned at all. Bravo to the author, I say.
     
  3. Crazy1

    Crazy1 Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    I was joking about the fact that Peter's still alive, he's actually quite funny in this.
     
  4. ixazncha0six

    ixazncha0six Raptured to Hell

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    I like this one, i read it a while ago
     
  5. Ringmaster

    Ringmaster Muggle

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    It's worth a read if you've got some time. The first chapter alone makes it worth clicking the link.
     
  6. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    This is the same as every other fic in the MWPP era, no plot with a bunch of inane dialogue.
     
  7. CGB

    CGB Auror

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    Yeah, you're right there isn't a real plot, but nonetheless it's really funny. I highly recommend it.
     
  8. BetryedBitch

    BetryedBitch Guest

    I read it a while ago and loved it it was worth the read
     
  9. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    this is true for all stories except the one about james teaching lily to fuck so that she can fuck her slytherin boyfriend. that was a good one. anyone know the link to that?
     
  10. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    ^LMAO, that sounds excellent.
     
  11. KANE

    KANE Groundskeeper

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    Twas a very funny story, good for a relaxing read. The lack of plot was irratating sometimes though but i didn't mind so much cause im in a good modd at the mo.
     
  12. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    This is surprisingly good for a MWPP story. The second half wasn't as funny as the first, but overall, it's still a great romantic comedy...
     
  13. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    Read several chapters of this story, which is complete, and it's surprisingly good. It's a James/Lily romance set in the MWPP era at Hogwarts, and there is no plot whatsoever. 'Romantic comedy' is exactly right. There's a lot of slightly humorous dialogue, and the usual pratfalls from Sirius and Pettigrew, who is likeable here.

    Anyway, it's solid writing, and if you want to immerse yourself in a Marauder era tale that is totally free of darkness, this is for you. I don't see it being a big hit here, but I'd give it a 4/5 for being a readable romance fic.
     
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