Title: Don't Fear the Reaper
Author: frodrick(aka industrious)
Rating: R
Genre: General
DLP Category:
Pairing: Ben/Nina, but only as a side-plot.
Status: Work in Progress
Summary: "Now, this little villain has escaped from hell twice already, Sam. He's violent and evil; he's murdered over a hundred innocents, and I want you to take him back to hell. The name he goes by? Angelus."
Link: http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-22351/industrious+Don+t+Fear+the+Reaper.htm or here in WbA: http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?p=372640


I'm not the greatest author in the world, but I was hoping for some feedback on the story. I know the prologue and first chapter aren't the longest in the world, but I'm still learning. Any help would really be appreciated.

 

Umm...anyone?

 

Dude you posted this a little early. I mean you've esenttially got one one chapter broken up into 3 parts so I personally have no idea if this is going to be good or just plain old suck.

I can say your grammar isn't cringe worthy but other than that i have nothing to say