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schoutje
04-27-2006, 09:20 PM
Title: Chaos:Destruction: My work is done here
Author: TheBonnie
Rating: K
Genre: timetravel
Pairing: is postHBP, but I don't think he gets back with ginny (no pas made)
Status: Work in Progress
Summary: Pre7thyear, Harry has a visitor when he gets out of the shower who sends him back in time to his third year!He's 13 again, Can he change the future, save three lives, and defeat Voldemort? We'll see!
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2908854/1/

thought I'd put it here, because seeing the numbers of reviews it's got it's not read much,( and I want updates)

ip82
04-27-2006, 10:58 PM
This start is OK.

It's just that... eh, you DO realise that this will be eventually be Sirius/Snape slash, right? Coz that's what Harry requested from Cupid in chapter 1. It's still good enough story for now, I'm just giving a fair warning.

schoutje
04-28-2006, 01:06 AM
from my opinion this is a harry-centric fic, so I don't think we get al the sickly stuff. And knowing both charactrics I doubt we get fluf between those two.
so I think I can stomach it, may be funny tough, those two together.

Patrik f
04-29-2006, 03:34 AM
As long as there isent any fluffy Sirius/Snape so can this story be great... also if he could snap Ginny out of her stalking and leave him alone would it be great :)

tridentwatch
04-29-2006, 09:05 PM
err Slash? Isn't anyone mildly disgusted by it? No offence to the homos but... :puke:

Mrriddler
04-29-2006, 10:02 PM
Sirius/Snape?! That's worth a good laugh. Well, as long as it's not with Harry or the main plot of the story.

Giovanni
04-29-2006, 10:43 PM
err Slash? Isn't anyone mildly disgusted by it? No offence to the homos but... :puke:

By Sirius/Snape fluff, yes... Because it proves the sheer idiocy of some people.

Of homosexuality? No. I can say that I am not. Why? Are you?

Niffler Lord
04-30-2006, 02:09 AM
Sirus/Snape..... hmmm it would be funny if they were only compled to make fluffy comments to each other randomly.... nothing more. Of course they would then proceed to wash their mouths with the strongest cleaning fluids around.

Sirus: Look you snarky-assed oversided fruit bat...

Snape: Enough you mangy mutt.... do you know your eyes glow when you are angry?

Sirus: What???

Snape: What??? I didn't say that!!!

Patrik f
04-30-2006, 03:13 AM
Sirus/Snape..... hmmm it would be funny if they were only compled to make fluffy comments to each other randomly.... nothing more. Of course they would then proceed to wash their mouths with the strongest cleaning fluids around.

Sirus: Look you snarky-assed oversided fruit bat...

Snape: Enough you mangy mutt.... do you know your eyes glow when you are angry?

Sirus: What???

Snape: What??? I didn't say that!!!
:D
Random fluffy comments rule!

Also I have a question, will he be totally messing up the timeline or trying to keep things happening like they did as much as possible?

tridentwatch
05-01-2006, 12:02 AM
err Slash? Isn't anyone mildly disgusted by it? No offence to the homos but... :puke:

By Sirius/Snape fluff, yes... Because it proves the sheer idiocy of some people.

Of homosexuality? No. I can say that I am not. Why? Are you?

Mildly due to my over active imagination *shudders*

But I have got nothing against gay people. Its none of my business.

Vassago
05-01-2006, 09:31 PM
err Slash? Isn't anyone mildly disgusted by it? No offence to the homos but... :puke:

By Sirius/Snape fluff, yes... Because it proves the sheer idiocy of some people.

Of homosexuality? No. I can say that I am not. Why? Are you?

Mildly due to my over active imagination *shudders*

But I have got nothing against gay people. Its none of my business.

Alot of great stories are slash, I just read over it, cuz im more interested in the story than to just abandon it because it's harry/voldemort or something.

I'm just saying, try stories first, before you blow them because it's slash and miss some great stories...

SLASH SUCKS
05-07-2006, 04:51 PM
I don't blow stories especially slash ones. The reason it has low reviews is because IT IS SLASH, I have no problem with people who like slash or whatever , but for me its too out of character to have homosexual relationships. Honestly a Snape/Sirus ship is just too unbelievable for me.

SuBzEr0
05-07-2006, 06:49 PM
I dont mind the slash as long as it isnt slash smut that makes me gag

Raijin
06-06-2006, 05:13 PM
slash is fine as long as its believable and the smut and overly fluffy parts are okay as long as they are easily avoided meaning that they dont contain key parts of the story.

Randeemy
06-06-2006, 05:39 PM
slash is fine as long as its believable and the smut and overly fluffy parts are okay as long as they are easily avoided meaning that they dont contain key parts of the story

HP and the Marcello school is an example. There are two OC's who are gay. There is no problem reading that for, In fact in that particular fic, I found their banter rather amusing, but when it takes a Canon character and rips it from canon, I just dont bother to read. Similar to why I dont much like overly manipulative!Dumbledore or Harem!Harry fics

Aekiel
06-06-2006, 06:15 PM
I read a story where Seamus was gay and kept trying to hit on Harry. Had Hermione bashing and a dominatrix!winky as well... What the hell was I on at the time? It was mostly just to freak Herman out though.

SLASH SUCKS
06-06-2006, 08:50 PM
The story was by Fangalla Marie and it was a parody making fun of Cliche Azkiban Harry is inocent stories. I thought it was quite funny a year or so ago when I was reading it. I don't know if it was finished, but if you're bored its worth a quick read through.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2205019/15/

doc_gerbil
06-06-2006, 11:07 PM
seems fine. sirius snape grossed me out, but meh, i can live with it. might have to do some drugs or drink some alcohol but i am willing to make that sacrifice. btw, can anyone tell me if you can be driven insane by hiccups (Sp?). i have had them for about an hour and am slowly losing the remaining sanioty i posses. I CANT FUNCTION.

Athenia
06-07-2006, 12:53 AM
seems fine. sirius snape grossed me out, but meh, i can live with it. .

I wasn't sure if the author was stilling doing this. When the new chapter (3) was put up, the specific names where taken out.

Lady Wildstar
08-31-2006, 03:50 PM
I happen to really like this fic. Slash and the like do not really bother me that much, as long as it's well written.

Styx
09-05-2006, 02:57 PM
I read a story where Seamus was gay and kept trying to hit on Harry. Had Hermione bashing and a dominatrix!winky as well... What the hell was I on at the time? It was mostly just to freak Herman out though.

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/620603/

Lady Wildstar
09-15-2006, 05:38 PM
Is this story going to be updated soon? I really wish it would, I find it rather funny.

Knox
09-17-2006, 11:43 PM
i really look forward to this being updated it is rather good

Dark Syaoran
09-28-2006, 11:24 PM
This story blows.

Leibhaftige Finsternis
10-09-2006, 01:10 AM
I politely request that this story be moved to the for review and re-voted on. Only because it is apparently being completely revamped and is now currently missing any Sirius/Snape relationships.

Acelin
10-10-2006, 06:44 PM
My fics and I are HISTORY! I will update when I get the time, so please be patient with me, okay? Thank you.

That Quote was by the Author. What's the point of sending this to the vote section when the updates are going to be far away from eachother. I suggest we don't move this until we see more than one update.

(EDIT: Forgot a T, shame on me)

Martia33
03-04-2007, 12:16 PM
This start is OK.

It's just that... eh, you DO realise that this will be eventually be Sirius/Snape slash, right? Coz that's what Harry requested from Cupid in chapter 1. It's still good enough story for now, I'm just giving a fair warning.

Hi, I'm the authoress of 'Chaos: Destruction:My work is Done here: and I have no idea where you came up with this. If your talking about the pre-revised version, I revised it because I wrote two different stories on the same plot line, one was a joke between me and another Authoress, one is the one your reading right now. I do not intend on making any slash pairings, for now, and if I do it will most likely be between new characters or characters that have always been homosexual, can you think of any? I would appreciate it if you refrained from putting words in my mouth, and allow me to speak for my self, if you were unsure of my intention, you should have contacted me, instead of spreading rumors. :whipped: Thank you.



-TheBonnie

ip82
03-04-2007, 12:48 PM
Hi, I'm the authoress of 'Chaos: Destruction:My work is Done here: and I have no idea where you came up with this. If your talking about the pre-revised version, I revised it because I wrote two different stories on the same plot line, one was a joke between me and another Authoress, one is the one your reading right now. I do not intend on making any slash pairings, for now, and if I do it will most likely be between new characters or characters that have always been homosexual, can you think of any? I would appreciate it if you refrained from putting words in my mouth, and allow me to speak for my self, if you were unsure of my intention, you should have contacted me, instead of spreading rumors. :whipped: Thank you.

-TheBonnie

If you looked at the date of that comment, you'd have seen it had been posted almost a year ago. Back then, I believe Harry had requested that Snape and Sirius be paired together in the alternate world. If you changed that in the meantime, then *shrugs* That's what you get when you rewrite a story and then post it under the same name.

ZanyMuggle
03-06-2007, 02:37 AM
As someone else stated, I don't care one way or another about homosexuality in a story, so long as it is in-character (no pun intended). However, Snape and Sirius being sexually attracted to each other is so grossly unbelievable that I have taken IQ damage just for writing it down.

On the other hand, I read the first chapter and liked it. No mention of Sirius/Snape was made. I'll continue reading until it gets stupid (if it does).