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Harry Potter: Keeper of the Dark Heart by Shadow Crystal Mage - W.I.T.C.H. - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Raijin, May 10, 2006.

2.3333299160004/5, 9 votes
  1. Raijin

    Raijin Slug Club Member

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    May 10, 2006 #1
    Title: Harry Potter: Keeper of the Dark Heart
    Author: Shadow Crystal Mage
    Rating: T
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Humor
    Pairing: Nothing serious(meaning that its kinda hard to tell)
    Status: Work in Progress
    Summary: [W.I.T.C.H. xover] Harry Potter is the Keeper of the Dark Heart, one of the two most powerful magical energy sources in the multiverse. What does he do with this power?

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2618118/1/

    Another HP crossover with an Anime. Pretty obscure though/
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    May 10, 2006 #2
    Heh, I cant believe this was posted here. I liked the start, the stuff with Tom Riddle was pretty cool, but the problem is about 4 chapters in. Harry spent about 5 chapters doing nothing which was really annoying, I dont know why I read them... must have been bored. The latest chapters had some action, which was cool. Harry broke some guys legs... other than that though... too much anime and manga things going on, even if it is crossed with one.

    Seriously, he is 'using' FF moves... meh.
     
  3. AntiChrist

    AntiChrist Professor

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    Aug 25, 2010 #3
    Eh. The writing is passable, but the plot is WTF? I didn't like the blatant flaunting of knowledge in the first chapter with Riddle or the info dump later on. I'm not sure how this cross over is supposed to work. It just seems ridiculous to me. Also Harry comes off as being way overpowered. Not my cup of tea.

    Then I skipped ahead a bit and Harry is using "Frost Rasengan" and other similarly ridiculous moves I assume are from anime I don't recognize. The next chapter mentions summoning Yugioh cards and I gave up on reading.

    1/5
     
  4. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Aug 26, 2010 #4
    ... Bwahahaha. I remember this. It should be put in the parody section for nostalgia's sake alone. :eek: