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Complete History Retold by Illeanah - T

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Zevrillion, Aug 2, 2005.

  1. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Title: History Retold
    Author: Illeanah
    Rating: T
    Category: Action/Adventure/General
    Chapters: 19
    Words: 31,553
    Updated: July 29, 2005
    Published: July 08, 2005

    Status: Complete
    Summary: Thrown back in time Harry has no choice but to accept the guardianship of a wizard hated throughout time Salazar Slytherin. But nothing is as it seems. There is more to snake tongue than meets the eye!
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2474298/1/


    The Sequel:
    Title: The One True Heir of Slytherin
    Author: Illeanah
    Rating: T
    Category: Action/Adventure/General
    Chapters: 19
    Words: 33,152
    Updated: August 16, 2005
    Published: July 31, 2005
    Status: Complete

    Summary: Harry is sent back to his own time only to find himself in utter choas. And what is the big deal with Salazar Slytherin's gift?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2511071/1/


    Checked by Minion, Nov. 26, 2012
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Nov 26, 2012
  2. magyareagle

    magyareagle Guest

    I love it

    The best time travel fic by far that I have ever read.
     
  3. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    They are pretty good aren't they.
     
  4. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I don't know what the hell the guy was trying to accomplish with the second fic, but it was a clusterfuck of plot points with very little segway in between chapters that often did not fit together at all.

    Sort of like HBP come to think of it.
     
  5. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    It's not the worst i've seen but its not as good as the first story.
     
  6. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    First story is great, but the sequel is a dissapointment.

    Harry's acting like he was apprentice of Peter Pettigrew, instead of Slytherin - he's sill easily cowed by fucking Snape and clueless as ever. You could read sequel without reading the first part, and Harry would seem the same as he was at the end of OOTP.
     
  7. haroon_angel

    haroon_angel Fourth Year

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    It Was Nice I Agree But There Was No Need Of Sequel.
     
  8. Xantam

    Xantam Denarii Host

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    You seriously need to stop necro-posting every year old topic you see. No one cares about your post count. I guarantee if negative rep was still around you would be just a bit above old trident. Also don't capatilize every fucking word. I know it has been mentioned before so you have no reason to continue doing this. In case you don't know, capitals are the big letters like these...

    ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOP
     
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