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Abandoned Fate Alternate Routes by Traingham - M - Fate/Stay Night

Discussion in 'Fate/Stay Night' started by Dark Syaoran, Oct 4, 2011.

4.1818180084229/5, 11 votes
  1. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Oct 4, 2011 #1
    Title: Fate Alternate Routes
    Author: Traingham
    Rating: M
    Pairing: Shirou/Multi
    Fandom: Fate/Stay Night
    Chapters: 4
    Words: 58,122
    Updated: October 2, 2011
    Published: October 1, 2009
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: Meet Emiya Shirou, self proclaimed superhero and a ladies man, despite not knowing it himself. These are the untold stories of his affairs with the dangerous women who live under the same roof with him.

    Link: FF.Net

    Very slow update rate but one of my favourite stories. Very solid writing and the author does well in using FSN-style humor to the fullest. While I've listed it as Shirou/Multi, he isn't with multiple girls at the same time - rather each chapter is a seperate universe, of sorts, where different girls get their turn to shine, so to speak.


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  2. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Oct 11, 2011 #2
    Wow. There's no epic plot here, as each chapter is its own instance, but the characters are fantastic. This really does employ FSN's style of humour to great effect. The relationships and tensions between the cast remind me greatly of the VN.

    Good work. 5/5.
     
  3. Erandil

    Erandil Minister of Magic

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    Oct 15, 2011 #3
    An interesting and funny story.

    The only problem that I have is that I don´t understand if the chapters are oneshots or if they form a story. Some characters like Rider develop over the different chapters and some don´t. And who is Luvia?
     
  4. DemonicInfluence

    DemonicInfluence Fourth Year

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