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Oneshot Cranes by hewhoistomriddle - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by TMNTurtwig, Oct 10, 2011.

  1. TMNTurtwig

    TMNTurtwig Professor

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    Title: Cranes
    Author: hewhoistomriddle
    Rating: T
    Fandom: Naruto
    Pairing: None
    Status: Oneshot
    Summary: "A thousand paper cranes were supposed to make wishes come true. Konan folds nine thousand and disproves the myth." Possible spoilers.

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5639750/1/Cranes

    Drabbles on each Akatsuki member from Konan's PoV. Short, simple, elegant, and beautiful. Plus, it's well written with only one glaring grammar error.

    4/5 in my opinion.
     
    Last edited: Oct 12, 2011
  2. Lungs

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    "Folds nine thousand."

    Rising. Urge. To. LOL.

    I lol'd.

    Then I read it.

    It works, alright. It works. Easily 4/5
     
  3. Khazad-Dumb

    Khazad-Dumb Loves the Gay Porn DLP Supporter

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    I enjoyed it, and while I certainly don't think it's 5/5 material, it's still good. A solid 4/5 for me.
     
  4. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I see why the comments above and the rating differ.

    Yes, it works, and it isn't bad, but I wouldn't stuff the library with it. It's the sheet of paper I would fold and place in the book it refers to.
     
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