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WIP Aftermath and Revelations by Ragnarok666 - T - StarCraft

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Tasoli, Oct 18, 2011.

  1. Tasoli

    Tasoli Minister of Magic

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    Title: Aftermath and Revelations
    Author: Ragnarok666
    Rating: T
    Genre: Sci-Fi/Adventure
    Pairing: James R. & Sarah K.
    Status: Work in Progress
    Summary:post Wings of Liberty. As Kerrigan struggles to find redemption, the rest of our heroes sought answers to the new threat on the horizon.

    Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6834021/1/Aftermath_and_Revelations

    One of the few good Starcraft stories. Grammar is decent and story while not really that original it is decently handled as well.
     
  2. Hashasheen

    Hashasheen Half-Blood Prince

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    Read the first five chapters. Pretty meh, and the characters blend together rather easily. Not much to my liking, especially with the weak writing.

    3/5

    :sherlock:
     
  3. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Oh christ. I remember when this was called "Next steps" or something like that.

    It is a passable only because everything else in the SC section is utter shit. And even then I wouldn't say that this thing is all that good.

    The writer runs fast and loose with SC canon or rather what little there is. Nova is Mengsk's rape baby(or something like that). Why? WHO KNOWS ITS JUST THERE.

    2.5/5


    I have been corrected. DISREGARD THIS.
     
    Last edited: Oct 23, 2011
  4. Innomine

    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I opened this thread excited about a good SC story. Then I read what Merc just said... god dammit.
     
  5. SKsniper128

    SKsniper128 Fifth Year

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    Actually, Merc is wrong.

    The story he mentions "Next Steps" was written by a different author, and is radically different.

    This one is actually somewhat decent. The author does take some liberties with unit types shown over different games. But overall it's fairly well-written.

    4/5 from me

    -SK
     
  6. Tasoli

    Tasoli Minister of Magic

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    It has fairly good action which is what pulled me to it. Characterization is a little weak but tolerable.

    you should give it a chance I don't belive it deserves to go to recycle bin.
     
  7. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Oh thank god.
     
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