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Master Slytherin
08-11-2005, 07:37 PM
Title: Shake Me!
Author: RoxieSnape
Rating: M/R/NC-17
Genre: General/Drama
Pairing: Harry/OC - NO slash
Chapters: 35
Words: 211,862 / 238,730 (txt / Ficwad)
Status: Complete
Summary: AU Harry disappears ten years ago, from his relatives. When he comes back he is not the innocent boy everyone knows. The Boy Who Lived, grew up differently than anyone would have imagined. He's not the goody goody way to polite boy from Number Four, he's a sarcastic, arrogant little twit, who has love deep down and wants to be loved. But can he open up to anyone around him? And what happens when Dumbledore finds him and wants him back? There will be multiple shippers. Harry will not be with one person only, not till the end of my story anyway.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2258167/1/
Link: http://www.ficwad.com/story/167231
Link (textfile): http://onj1.andrelouis.com/hp/Shake%20Me.txt

This is an AMAZING fic. Seriously, if you haven't read, it then read it. This is one of the best fics I have read, even better than Shezza's stuff imo. Harry is such a player and a badass!


Checked by Minion, Nov. 25, 2012
Thanks to SoS for the info: The story was deleted on / by ff.net.
I added links for Ficwad and a text file.

ChuckDaTruck
08-11-2005, 07:39 PM
This is a great fic. It gets a little crappy 2/3's of the way through for a few chapters, but then it picks up again. I really like this fic.

GOOD CALL, MASTER SLYTHERIN! :D

LT2000
08-11-2005, 07:43 PM
I didn't like it, to be honest. First, I find the idea of Harry in bloody Hufflepuff to be repugnant, regardless of the reasoning behind it. Second, that damned fucking baby of his. Pointless, and a source for ridiculous amounts of filler material that made it rather obvious to me that the author had nothing better to write about. Third, the presence of more Harry/Hermione than I like to stomach, even if they didn't work out in the end. Add in some rather unsubtle Cho bashing, and you have a formula for an LT2000 bitch rant. Story had some good points here and there, but it just never really had anything truly outstanding to make up for all the negatives.

ChuckDaTruck
08-11-2005, 07:45 PM
good points. The baby was bullshit.

Master Slytherin
08-11-2005, 07:51 PM
I thought him being in Hufflepuff was hilarious! The H/Hr was a bit shit. I thought the build up to the baby was good with the girl dying but the baby wasn't thaaat bad.

What I want to know is how she got away with the sex scenes when many others were much less intense.

Nuit
08-11-2005, 07:54 PM
The story was OK, although sometimes a wee bit strange.

LT2000
08-11-2005, 07:56 PM
Aye, Hufflepuff might be good for a laugh, but I don't think it really works in a serious fic like this. And I find that more highly acclaimed fics tend to get away with the ecchi more easily. I still can't believe sometimes that Prince of Darkness hasn't been deleted yet. The exception to that rule seemingly being poor Shezza, whose gotten axed for explicit content on more than one occasion if memory serves.

Vecna
08-11-2005, 07:58 PM
I quit reading this once he had a kid.

Nuit
08-11-2005, 07:58 PM
Or Master Eldryn or TheSteffis.

IndoGhost
08-11-2005, 08:34 PM
tried to read it but couldnt....donno why :cry: o'well :lol:

Western_Frontier
08-11-2005, 09:00 PM
I didn't like like the fact that Harry had a kid. But other than that I love it. Harry sleeping with Justin's sister is classic....

Midknight
08-11-2005, 09:48 PM
I didn't like it, to be honest. First, I find the idea of Harry in bloody Hufflepuff to be repugnant, regardless of the reasoning behind it. Second, that damned fucking baby of his. Pointless, and a source for ridiculous amounts of filler material that made it rather obvious to me that the author had nothing better to write about. Third, the presence of more Harry/Hermione than I like to stomach, even if they didn't work out in the end. Add in some rather unsubtle Cho bashing, and you have a formula for an LT2000 bitch rant. Story had some good points here and there, but it just never really had anything truly outstanding to make up for all the negatives.

yeah we've discussed this in some other thread I think, and we both agreed.

Sticking him in Hufflepuff, and making him everything a Hufflepuff "isnt" was retarded.

The baby bit got on my nerves, I cannot stand filler material at all, so much more the author could of used.

And I think I've seen enough of the "arrogant ragamuffin who just wants to be loved"bit to vomit up blood, I'd rather have the "kill em all" Harry, at least then he doesn't come off cool one moment, then like a bitch the next

Giovanni
08-11-2005, 10:34 PM
This story annoyed me to no end.

It had so much potential... Which all got promptly pissed down the drain. The baby was important to the story, but I would rather have the fucking thing die with its much and an angry Harry who wants vengeance.

FF.net are really annoying. I mean seriously, with all the slash on there why axe the few good Het stories that have just a small fraction.

LT2000: Don't worry about your story getting axed. Your content isn't that bad in comparison to all the other ones.... Plus it is pretty popular.

Nuit
08-11-2005, 10:36 PM
I think you can't get worse than some Slash stories and those never get deleted

Western_Frontier
08-11-2005, 11:49 PM
Do you think that some of the mods are female slash lovers and that is why they tend to not delete slash?

ChuckDaTruck
08-12-2005, 12:34 AM
Don't even try to understand the admins over at fanfic.

I checked this story out again (I read a LONG time ago) and I hated that moment after he kills the people who MURDERED the mother of his child, and Harry's like, "How could I do such a thing? I am as bad as Voldemort. What has become of me?"

From that point on it was down hill only getting better towards the end. THis story could have been A LOT better. Could have done without the Harry Hermione also.

Nuit
08-12-2005, 12:54 AM
Well some people like wuss!Harry.

IndoGhost
08-12-2005, 12:57 AM
the question is why would anybody with half a brain like wuss!harry?

Nuit
08-12-2005, 12:59 AM
Because they like Slash, mpreg and more.

ChuckDaTruck
08-12-2005, 02:10 AM
lol

Dark Syaoran
08-12-2005, 05:38 AM
Spent to much time on his baby.....

Master Slytherin
08-12-2005, 06:21 AM
LT2000: Don't worry about your story getting axed. Your content isn't that bad in comparison to all the other ones.... Plus it is pretty popular.

It doesn't matter how popular it is...Shezza is one of the most popular writers and his got deleted and mine also got deleted. Come to think of it...it's mostly males that get theirs deleted by the sounds of it...very suspicious...

Dark Syaoran
08-12-2005, 06:24 AM
The females send nude pictures of themselves to admin so their story isnt axed.

LT2000
08-12-2005, 08:17 AM
It doesn't matter how popular it is...Shezza is one of the most popular writers and his got deleted and mine also got deleted. Come to think of it...it's mostly males that get theirs deleted by the sounds of it...very suspicious...

LMAO, it's an AMAZONIAN CONSPIRACY~!!! Well, there's only one thing left to do. *Watches a Married With Children marathon and breaks out the NO MA'AM shirt*

Giovanni
08-12-2005, 10:30 AM
hmmm... I wonder if Shezza is posting somewhere else.

Master Slytherin
08-12-2005, 11:11 AM
No his fics are on hold. I re-read 'Future Remapped' from a writers point of view and I think I've learned what to do and what not to do :)


The females send nude pictures of themselves to admin so their story isnt axed.

LMAO they probably do

ChuckDaTruck
08-12-2005, 12:23 PM
lol

Dark Syaoran
08-13-2005, 12:39 AM
I hope Shezza continue's Cell Block. That's a good Harry/Blaise(fem) story. He's a funny little prick in that one.

Master Slytherin
08-13-2005, 06:07 AM
True true.

Akalon
08-26-2005, 01:24 PM
Well Future Remapped is good, damn good, but I haven't read Cell Block as of yet, I've never seemed interested in any Harry/Narcissca or the Harry/Bellatrix fics, though I do like FR of his, and yes I wouldn't be suprised if some chicks did send in pics of themselves to FFnet. I mean hell I've looked and can't find their 'rule book' on what you can and can't do or post on their, and it's been really annoying. I"m what you'd call a character maker more then a story writer, but I do get good ideas at times but my problem is I don't know how to start a story off, and that's the only thing that's always stopped me, I mean I can get the middle of a story all thought out and storylined but not the beginning or end sequance's. I've actually got a character of mine being used /with my permission/ in a HP X-over fic that's pretty good. Me and the author who is using my character have tried starting a fic centered around the HP universe but he's busy with his own stuff so we haven't been able to get anything done really :cry: :cry: , and with my lack of writing skills nothing is getting done, so well I'd like to know if anyone would be willing to take a look at what has been done so far and maybe help me out with it??? But anyways I was talking about Shezza and yes Shezza's work is damn good, and I've read LT2000's Dakath story and it's good, though I have been wondering how he keeps from being axed by the admin over there. If anyone wants to check out the fic I'm in the author is called Ray1.

LT2000
08-26-2005, 02:28 PM
I've read LT2000's Dakath story and it's good, though I have been wondering how he keeps from being axed by the admin over there.

LMAO, you and me both. I like to think that I do a good job of toeing the line separating "R" from "NC-17." But it's probably mostly luck, to be honest. I keep all my stuff backed up just in case the worst eventually happens.

Master Slytherin
08-26-2005, 03:04 PM
I never understand how people lose their work...don't you write on word or something then save it? If it's saved, you can never lose it. Shezza's foursome amazingly stayed on...

Nuit
08-26-2005, 03:06 PM
Perhaps it's an excuse to stop writting.

Giovanni
08-26-2005, 04:02 PM
I dunno,. it is possible to lose your work. I know becuse it happened to me once last year. I had a 15 page honors project typed up perfectly and everything. I even had the video done on my computer (it was a written paper and video project) I also had a 10 page script.

My computer crashed 5 days before it was due. All of the files were lost. Thankfully I got an extention because my teacher knew I had it done. But man was I pissed. 50 hours of work tossed out the window. 30 of which were editing the video.

Though it did go more quickly the second time as I already had the film and the script plus I knew how to make all of the edits.

Zevrillion
08-26-2005, 04:22 PM
I dunno,. it is possible to lose your work. I know becuse it happened to me once last year. I had a 15 page honors project typed up perfectly and everything. I even had the video done on my computer (it was a written paper and video project) I also had a 10 page script.

My computer crashed 5 days before it was due. All of the files were lost. Thankfully I got an extention because my teacher knew I had it done. But man was I pissed. 50 hours of work tossed out the window. 30 of which were editing the video.

Though it did go more quickly the second time as I already had the film and the script plus I knew how to make all of the edits.

And what does that teach us. “CONSTANT VIGILANCE!” :D . No, but you should always backup important things that you don’t want to lose.

Dark Syaoran
08-26-2005, 10:16 PM
I got the stories i'm trying to perfect on floppy disk because a few years ago when I wrote a story my computer crashed and I lost all 18 chapters... I think that was really the last story i've written and actually posted in ages... well, that was actually good anyway.

Perfect Insanity
11-10-2005, 04:52 PM
it had such potential..... until chapter 19. then i just couldnt continue. i mean he chose hermoine over a hot vampire chick who was all over him. that just shows extraordinarily poor judgment

Narf
11-10-2005, 05:31 PM
Don't worry, Hermione is gone later, he dumps her. He's too much to handle apparently.

Perfect Insanity
11-10-2005, 05:35 PM
*bows before superman avatar*

i will continue reading just to get to whatever chapter that was

Perfect Insanity
11-10-2005, 09:39 PM
it has gotten a lot better but i found this line extremely amusing

He had always been close to Shari, more CLOSER than normal but this was different.

other than that slight typo, its been better

ip82
11-14-2005, 08:07 AM
Very good story... yes, save for the fucking baby.

But you have to consider the fact that the autor is a girl. She probably put that bit to emphasize that beneath Harry's rough and rougish exterior lies a sweet and caring man. Girls love that kind of shit, same way kids love Santa Claus. At least kids learn the truth sooner or later :-).

On the other hand, I think that Hufflepuff bit was brilliant. I mean, what's more Slytherin than hiding your true abilities and making everyone underestimate you? Harry in Hufflepuff is like a wolf amongst the sheep.

Anyway, great story overall (yea, yea, save for the fucking baby).

Too bad the sequel was quickly abandoned.

Narf
11-19-2005, 12:25 AM
Was it abandoned? I knew she took it off, because she wasn't happy about it. But I thought that she was going to start it up again. ::shrug:: Guess not.

Antivash
11-19-2005, 09:58 AM
She is... i get the odd notification from her yahoo group about people asking... its one of those im writing but there are delays thing going on with it...

Lord Osiris
11-20-2005, 01:09 AM
I think that Hufflepuff bit was brilliant. I mean, what's more Slytherin than hiding your true abilities and making everyone underestimate you? Harry in Hufflepuff is like a wolf amongst the sheep.


Here here, i liked that bit to, its different cause i haven't seen to many do this so it's fresh.

Vitia_Perrarus
12-09-2005, 10:21 AM
"Shake me" Sucks! Honestly, the idea of Harry fucking Potter in Hufflepuff is horrible. And why og why does he have a child dragging after him?? It just ruin the whole story! And what's up with the Granger/Harry romans......... There is no way in hell they ever fit together, not in this fic and not in any other fic!

I read at least 7 chapter before I gave up, it wasn't getting any better, only getting worse!

ip82
12-09-2005, 11:02 AM
Actually, I liked Harry in Hufflepuff, especially since he doesn't belong there. That's good Slytherin tactics, make your opponents underestimate yourself.

HHr wasn't that badly done. Even better was that they broke up later on and Harry went with that vamp nymho chick.

But the baby... Aaggh! It fucking ruined the story! It was still fun to read, mind you, but it could have been one of the best. The author obviously let her female instincts overpower her common sense. I hope fucking baby dies in the first chapter of the sequel (if there is one).

Xiph0
12-09-2005, 06:01 PM
I've read a few of RxoieSnape's fics before, cause the name is familiar, but I got into this one and, as someone said " puke blood ". Not my type of shit, rather the kill-em-all cunning, has-balls! fics.

Dark Syaoran
12-09-2005, 09:53 PM
She did start a sequal, it was into the fourth chapter and suddenly it vanished. Wasnt that great anyway. He had more kids....

XclusivPetal
12-02-2007, 03:55 AM
Nuit interestin comment halarious as hell and im in agreement read the story it was okiiiiii cute baby but not needed story started okidokie wasnt somethin i couldnt put down afta a few mins but it was alright but really ufflepuff thats jus ummm well nice word plain stupid wasnt workin. as for slash stories more of those on ff.net then completed stories worth readin maybe i'll get bored enough oneday and actually count..

Petal

dragon_89
12-07-2007, 02:02 PM
i like this fic.. funny and easy to read:)
i duno about the sequel i like how this one finished

Cathal
12-11-2007, 08:54 PM
A damn good story!
I'm always up to a good indepedent!Harry fic so that's already a plus. I actually liked the reasonings behind the hufflepuff!Harry. It's original if nothing else. One more brownie point. HHr wasn't bad... mainly because they broke up. The half-vampire chick... she kinda lacked depth the other characters had... or maybe it's just me?
Oh, and the baby idea wasn't all that bad. The author used it mostly to show off some finer aspects of Harry's personality. Not the best way to do it but still...

Demonic Chair Stealer
12-11-2007, 09:48 PM
When I first read this two years ago I liked every aspect of it, sadly that included the baby.

I had forgotten about this story, and so when I saw this thread I decided to reread it, and I still have to say it is still amazing. The only issue is the fact that my taste have changed and so while the story is still within the top ten percent that FFN has to offer I agree that it puts way too much emphasis on the baby. That and I now hate H/Hr.

But the Bad ass Harry element makes this story completely worth it. Plus it is one of the first Harry in Hufflepuff fics that I read, and one of the few good ones.

capo327
12-13-2007, 07:00 PM
I think it was pretty good, especially the beginning. H/Hr usually doesn't bother me much, but it didn't at all this time given the reasoning behind her attraction for him. The beginning was the best part before it slowly turned into a wuss!Harry fic. I didn't like the baby since it seems the only reasoning behind that is to show his soft side. The only other use for her was to get him angry with Dumbledore, which could have been done in a different way.

One more thing. Was I the only person ripping their hair out at the constant descriptions of what people were wearing? It seemed every chapter there were at least ten sentences devoted to describing someone's clothing. It quickly became repetitive and boring, especially since every other description included the line "but it still left something for the imagination."

Niffler Lord
12-15-2007, 04:29 AM
No you are not... I too found that annoying so I skipped paragraphs. This started out as a good fic then it became a pointless near angstfest. The biggest annoyance to me was the way the girls kept comming on... it seemed so fake and unreal. Unfortunate that that aspect seemed to make out most of the latter half of the fic. Then of course the end pairing was.... too perfect.

It was fun at the start, but went down hill.

ParseltonguePhoenix
12-15-2007, 03:50 PM
Alright, let's see. Horrible grammar, throughout. Geri was kind of an obvious choice. Shari is a cool character.

I like a lot of what happens in this story, but found it somewhat lacking in...something. The baby was overdone at times, but was very useful as a plot device...and I can relate to the "I want my fucking kid" side of Harry, here.

After reading it all the way through...I liked parts of it and thought other parts were embarrassingly bad. And I only have one other thought to add here...That is one shitty ending.

2.5/5

Andro
01-26-2009, 09:58 PM
Wow! How can a story suck this bad!

The small child had one motive in life and that was to survive, and that’s what he was going to do. He was going to survive.

I know writers are sometimes unaware of what they write, but this is pushing it to the extreme. If I wrote that badly I wouldn't have the self-esteem to write 200,000 more words.

No discernible improvement either.

This Harry is a psueo!badass. He spews profanities left and right, but he has none of the charm of Harry from the Denarian series.

Too much of the story was low-level plotting, filler. The story amply demonstrates the boredom inherent in setting the story in Hogwarts. I didn't even get reach the part where the baby is introduced.

1/5

Narf
01-26-2009, 10:32 PM
Looool, holy shit I remember this story. I think I actually liked it way back when. Alright, use the thread ranking thing at the top people, then I'll move it to the Recycling Bin.

Ragon
01-26-2009, 10:37 PM
Holy shit is right. This is old lol. 3 stars now.

MellowYellow
01-27-2009, 09:46 AM
Posted by Ragon
Holy shit is right. This is old lol. 3 stars now.

3 stars wtf give it 1 star.

slickrcbd
10-19-2009, 01:15 PM
Looks like RoxySnape deleted all her old stories on FF.net. Too bad, I really liked this one, and it was one of the few non-slash stories she wrote.

Innomine
10-19-2009, 05:29 PM
It was probably the best fic of its kind out there. Surprisingly readable, I mean, him having a kid and everything.

The Wizard
10-19-2009, 06:08 PM
I gave up reading this around the time he went to Hogwarts. Not bad, but not good. 2/5

Perspicacity
10-19-2009, 06:29 PM
This is one of those stories, like Knowledge is Power, that I look back on and remember the handful of epic moments and tend to forget the cringe-worthy bits in between (until I would go reread, that is, and then I would surprise myself by how much I would have to skim).

If one skips the sappy baby moments, Ginny's flashing her tits at Harry, and interminable descriptions of what Harry decided to wear that day, it is probably a 3/5. With those moments, it was appropriately placed in the Recycling Bin.

Kensington
10-20-2009, 03:08 AM
Huh, I kinda liked this story. As you noted Perspicacity - it did have its moments. I found the whole Harry/Hermione thing ridiculous, but I did like the half-vampire female OC Harry hooked up with. The baby was annoying.

Shame it's gone. I'm too lazy to look at the moment, but is there a copy of this in Borgin's DLP library jamboree?

Johnny Farrar
10-20-2009, 05:40 AM
Looks like RoxySnape deleted all her old stories on FF.net. Too bad, I really liked this one, and it was one of the few non-slash stories she wrote.

Was it deleted by the author? Or was it was it removed by the administrators? Since, I couldn't even find the author's profile. And I am not sure if people can delete their accounts at FFN by themselves.

Shame it's gone. I'm too lazy to look at the moment, but is there a copy of this in Borgin's DLP library jamboree?

Yes, there is.

I remember reading this story a long time back. Some parts were good, some were pathetic. I remember getting bored and never reading the fic to its completion.

Richard
10-22-2009, 11:28 PM
I always did love this story. Even if the other members thought it was crap, I found myself very disappointed that it was deleted.

Andro
10-23-2009, 12:21 AM
It was probably the best fic of its kind out there. Surprisingly readable, I mean, him having a kid and everything.

You're giving it too much credit. It was definitely not readable - objectively, the writing competence just wasn't there.

Dark Minion
10-23-2009, 04:56 AM
I kinda liked it too, back in the days. It was kind of unique, and still is, as readable AU indy!Harry fics are still rather rare.

Though, yeah, the mushy parts had been irritating, but that's to be expected with a girl writing it. She even wrote a short sequel "Shake Me - Moonlight Wedding", which I didn't read.

Inquisition
10-23-2009, 06:18 AM
http://fanfiction.mine.nu/p/4.php

The Google still works. Fags.

Memory King
10-26-2009, 08:38 PM
The author goes by Tranquilized-Alias (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/709313/) nowadays.

Story is available in the DLP Archive as well, in HTML format.

I really wanted to give it a 3, but writing just isn't clean enough and the author puts far too many things into the story just for making Harry more bad-ass.

But there are definitely quite a few interesting sequences here, and a few funny parts.

2/5

darthme1011
05-19-2010, 10:28 AM
where in the archive can i find this i didn't see it i love this story

Dark Minion
05-19-2010, 01:28 PM
where in the archive can i find this i didn't see it i love this story

Erm... please learn how to use a keyboard, and learn how to use google.

Here is a link:

http://forum.writingcenter4.info/index.php?action=mgallery;sa=item;id=15086

Vengashii
05-19-2010, 03:05 PM
The summary alone makes me vomit.

slickrcbd
11-04-2010, 07:19 AM
Erm... please learn how to use a keyboard, and learn how to use google.

Here is a link:

http://forum.writingcenter4.info/index.php?action=mgallery;sa=item;id=15086

I've tried Google (in fact, that's how I found this thread), and I got the two results listed here, as well as this thread. Neither of them will load. All the rest of the results on the first 50 matches seem to be pages with links that point to the dead fanfiction.net link.

So where in the archive can I find it? All I can seem to find is this thread.
I'm not active here enough to know if I'm missing something semi-obvious to the regulars.

Antivash
11-04-2010, 12:15 PM
The author goes by Tranquilized-Alias (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/709313/) nowadays.

Since some other retard bumped it, and I came and checked it out... I ... am actually kind of o_O and not entirely disappointed by this person...

FFN-Profile:

~ ABOUT THE AUTHOR ~
HETEROSEXUAL WRITING ACCOUNT
Yaoi - Naruto and Bleach Readers Here (http://www.fanfiction.net/%7Etranquilizednight)
Slash - Harry Potter Readers Here (http://www.fanfiction.net/%7Ebittersweetalias)



<_< If only everyone could be this considerate to us homophones...

Custer
11-04-2010, 02:52 PM
<_< If only everyone could be this considerate to us homophones...


Don't you mean...homophobes?:awesome (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z9rD4Paq0zE)

Antivash
11-04-2010, 03:29 PM
Don't you mean...homophobes?:awesome (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z9rD4Paq0zE)
Wow. How ever did you read through my super subtle joke of changing one letter from an insult into a completely different and unoffensive word for the purpose of humor?!

I applaud your genius.

cloud91
11-04-2010, 06:43 PM
I've tried Google (in fact, that's how I found this thread), and I got the two results listed here, as well as this thread. Neither of them will load. All the rest of the results on the first 50 matches seem to be pages with links that point to the dead fanfiction.net link.

So where in the archive can I find it? All I can seem to find is this thread.
I'm not active here enough to know if I'm missing something semi-obvious to the regulars.

He's actually right I just tried both links on here and neither of them work.

Dark Minion
11-06-2010, 05:49 AM
Erm... please learn how to use a keyboard, and learn how to use google.

Here is a link:

http://forum.writingcenter4.info/index.php?action=mgallery;sa=item;id=15086

I assume neither of you actually tried the link I posted months ago. It is still working.

cloud91
11-06-2010, 12:53 PM
Yes but when you download it none of the files will open.

Dark Minion
11-06-2010, 01:09 PM
Yes but when you download it none of the files will open.

Yes, it is working. You can download the zip file, and if you're using a computer running with a contemporary operating system you can open it. As you are reading this site you ought to be able to view the html-files inside of the zip container.

The Wizard
11-06-2010, 02:06 PM
Download 7zip (http://www.7-zip.org/). Try again. Go away. ._.

slickrcbd
11-18-2010, 05:31 PM
I assume neither of you actually tried the link I posted months ago. It is still working.
Actually, at the time I posted and for at least several days afterwards the whole Writing Center4 site was down.

Sorry I took so long. I've just discovered that I'm not getting the alerts for this thread because Hotmail was marking them as spam, I thought I'd fixed that problem years ago. Then again, I rarely visit these forums.

---------- Post automerged at 04:31 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:23 PM ----------

Yes, it is working. You can download the zip file, and if you're using a computer running with a contemporary operating system you can open it. As you are reading this site you ought to be able to view the html-files inside of the zip container.
You don't even need a contemporary operating system. I've opened ZIP files on an Apple II running ProDOS with what I think was called "PunkUnZIP" (based on pkzip), with GS/OS on my own Apple IIGS using several tools including I think ShrinkIT as well as the aformentioned PunkUnZIP, 68K Macs with ZipIt (and later Stuffit Expander), Mac OS versions prior to OS X can use either Zip IT (all versions) or Stuffit Expander (I think that needs System 7 or later) and MS-DOS as early as 3.30 with PKzip.
I think every distribution of Linux from the beginning came with an unzip command (not to be confused with gunzip for .gz files).
Most Unix versions made in the last 20 years also have unzip, or it can be downloaded quite easily.

RosePetal
05-09-2012, 06:14 PM
Anyone have a working link for this?

Sesc
05-09-2012, 06:47 PM
Nuit interestin comment halarious as hell and im in agreement read the story it was okiiiiii cute baby but not needed story started okidokie wasnt somethin i couldnt put down afta a few mins but it was alright but really ufflepuff thats jus ummm well nice word plain stupid wasnt workin. as for slash stories more of those on ff.net then completed stories worth readin maybe i'll get bored enough oneday and actually count..

Petal

'sup Petal?

Anyway, it's still in the archives (http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=8894).

Sauce Bauss
11-25-2012, 07:22 AM
It's also been uploaded by somebody(not the author) on Ficwad. http://www.ficwad.com/story/167231

Dark Minion
11-25-2012, 10:30 AM
Thanks for the info. I updated the first post with two links to other sites.