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05-06-2012, 12:20 PM
Title: Last Child of Krypton: Redux
Author: Chuckman
Rating: T
Genre: Adventure/Sci-Fi
DLP Category: Other Fandoms/General
Pairing: possible Shinji/Asuka, but the author have yet to decide if there will be any at all
Chapters: 19
Words: 230,178
Updated: August 2, 2012
Published: January 7, 2012
Status: Complete
Summary: Doomed planet. Desperate scientists. Last hope.
Link: fanfiction.net (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7720528/1/Last_Child_of_Krypton_Redux)

It's rewrite of Last Child of Krypton (https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?p=561917#post561917). As I mentioned in the other thread, in the previous version the author made a mistake with adding too much elements from DC comics and rushing the ending.

This time it seems that he is more careful with the focus of the story and lets it move with its own pace.

Right now I give it a strong 5/5 and hope that this time the quality will stay high for the whole fic.

Checked by Minion, Nov. 25, 2012

Oliver Kingston
05-06-2012, 06:35 PM
Summary: Doomed planet. Desperate scientists. Last hope.

Convinced me to read..

05-07-2012, 08:26 PM
Read it last night and forgot to leave a review. Genuinely good fic, and I can't wait for more. Definitely deserves to be in the library. 5/5

05-08-2012, 08:02 AM
It is interesting and consistent, but there is something lacking for it to be a top ranking story.
For me, was somewhere at 3.75/5 Still, there is place for growth and I will be returning some time in the future to look at the progress.

Having glanced at the previous version, there is definite improvement, and the story now is enjoyable, compared to being readable before.
Still, not a perfect one yet.

Dark Minion
05-08-2012, 02:45 PM
Convinced me to read..

Actually, yes, it did.

I am not that far in yet, so I won't rate it for now, but what I read so far managed to draw me in.