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WIP Scattered Memories by WhizkidHV - T - Fire Emblem

Discussion in 'Games' started by TMNTurtwig, Jul 2, 2012.

4.1666665077209/5, 6 votes
  1. TMNTurtwig

    TMNTurtwig Professor

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    Jul 2, 2012 #1
    Title: Scattered Memories
    Author: WhizkidHV
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure
    Status: WiP
    Fandom: Fire Emblem 7
    Summary: A lone tactician wanders the Sacaen plains and embarks on an adventure with the one he meets... Yet this has already occurred before, numerous times. He is plagued by memories that are, and yet are not his. Seeking answers, he journeys once more. The mystery of his life awaits, and his scattered memories are the pieces to a greater puzzle. But does he have the right pieces?
    Link: fanfiction.net

    It's a first person story from Mark's point of view with amnesia as a plot device. Because of that, sometimes it can get hard to follow the stream of consciousness style writing when Mark himself doesn't know what's going on. Overall grammar is pretty good, only a few errors which are mostly mix-ups of tenses. The major breaks from canon start in chapter 5.

    My favorite story so far in the Fire Emblem fandom, and it gets a 4.5/5 from me.
     
  2. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Jul 25, 2012 #2
    No one? No review? Not even one rating?

    I'll give it another five days (til July 30), then I'll move this into the Recycling Bin.
     
  3. Kang

    Kang Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Jul 26, 2012 #3
    Surprisingly good and brings back some great memories of Fire Emblem. In fact its really kindled my interest in the FE fandom. 4/5
     
  4. thebrute7

    thebrute7 High Inquisitor

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    Jul 26, 2012 #4
    Definitely interesting. It is unique in its own way from other Fire Emblem stories I have read, though I have only read a few.

    4/5 from me. The mistakes are minimal.