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Oneshot Harry Potter and the Dance off by Surarrin - K

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Jon, Sep 12, 2006.

3.4166667461395/5, 12 votes
  1. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Sep 12, 2006 #1
    Title: Harry Potter and the Dance off
    Author: Surarrin
    Rating: K
    Genre: Humor
    Pairing: None.
    Words: 4,114
    Published: January 6, 2006
    Status: Complete
    Summary: [One Shot]Two Horcruxes left, what does Harry do? he challenges Voldemort to a dance off. If Voldemort can beat his score he concedes the war. But he never said what would happen if Voldemort failed to beat it.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2740700/1/

    Sounds retarded an d like a gay Highschool musical-whatever the hell the Ballet school stories involve, but it isn't. I actually forgot I wrote this, even though it was posted on ff.net, until someone reviewed it again.


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  2. Rob

    Rob Looked into the void

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    Sep 12, 2006 #2
    Bizarre. Pretty funny - the mongoose bit made me laugh. Doesn't have the structure for something seriously funny, but is good for a light laugh. Grammar and spelling was decent but could be fixed up with 5 minutes and MS Word. 3.75/5
     
  3. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    Sep 12, 2006 #3
    heh, I loved it very funny. For me at least.

    3.5/5 would be a 4/5 if you took the time to fixt the spelling.
     
  4. Mercenary

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    Sep 12, 2006 #4
    For humor its good. Anything else no. So my score would be 4/5, for humor
     
  5. Master Slytherin

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    Sep 16, 2006 #5
    Anyone else got an opinion they'd like to share?
     
  6. Leibhaftige Finsternis

    Leibhaftige Finsternis First Year

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    Sep 17, 2006 #6
    It's pretty funny. 3.8/5
     
  7. Niffler Lord

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    Sep 18, 2006 #7
    That was strange.... kindda funny thought.

    3.5/5
     
  8. The Dark Lord Squash

    The Dark Lord Squash Denarii Host

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    Sep 18, 2006 #8
    Um yeah that was..... weird.

    2/5
     
  9. SushiZ

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    Sep 18, 2006 #9
    good for a good laugh nothing more liked it very much 3.5/5.
     
  10. Dark Lord Rostam

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    Sep 19, 2006 #10
    Hah, I actually love it. Quite funny.
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

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    Heh. This got rid of bordem for a few minutes. Thank you.
     
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