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Jon
09-11-2006, 08:59 PM
Title: Harry Potter and the Dance off
Author: Surarrin
Rating: K
Genre: Humor
Pairing: None.
Status: Complete
Summary: [One Shot]Two Horcruxes left, what does Harry do? he challenges Voldemort to a dance off. If Voldemort can beat his score he concedes the war. But he never said what would happen if Voldemort failed to beat it.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2740700/1/

Sounds retarded an d like a gay Highschool musical-whatever the hell the Ballet school stories involve, but it isn't. I actually forgot I wrote this, even though it was posted on ff.net, until someone reviewed it again.

Rob
09-11-2006, 11:11 PM
Bizarre. Pretty funny - the mongoose bit made me laugh. Doesn't have the structure for something seriously funny, but is good for a light laugh. Grammar and spelling was decent but could be fixed up with 5 minutes and MS Word. 3.75/5

Stalicon
09-12-2006, 12:10 AM
heh, I loved it very funny. For me at least.

3.5/5 would be a 4/5 if you took the time to fixt the spelling.

Mercenary
09-12-2006, 01:09 AM
For humor its good. Anything else no. So my score would be 4/5, for humor

Master Slytherin
09-16-2006, 03:51 PM
Anyone else got an opinion they'd like to share?

Leibhaftige Finsternis
09-17-2006, 08:18 AM
It's pretty funny. 3.8/5

Niffler Lord
09-18-2006, 01:42 AM
That was strange.... kindda funny thought.

3.5/5

The Dark Lord Squash
09-18-2006, 05:35 PM
Um yeah that was..... weird.

2/5

SushiZ
09-18-2006, 06:11 PM
good for a good laugh nothing more liked it very much 3.5/5.

Dark Lord Rostam
09-18-2006, 09:25 PM
Hah, I actually love it. Quite funny.

Dark Syaoran
09-20-2006, 12:25 AM
Heh. This got rid of bordem for a few minutes. Thank you.