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Oneshot This Endless Cycle by Lachesis - PG13

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Amerision, Oct 22, 2006.

  1. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Title: This Endless Cycle

    Author: Lachesis
    Genre: Fantasy/Drama/Angst [Recommended for the Alternates]
    Rating: PG-13
    Words: 2128
    Published: August 24, 2006

    Status: ONESHOT/Complete

    Summary: All life is but an endless cycle, birth to death and death to birth, cause and effect, effect and cause. As Harry Potter is about to find out... Some profanity, one-shot until further notice.

    Link: http://www.ficwad.com/story/28413

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    Review: A good take on the Harry is Voldemort theory. It's kind of short, and probably won't appeal to everyone.

    3/5


    Checked by Minion, Nov. 26, 2012
    Replaced the link with Ficwad's new link.
     
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  2. PsychicLunar

    PsychicLunar Third Year

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    This is posted on ffnet under hoshi-tachi too, I read it some time ago and reread it recently. It always was my favorite take on Harry is Voldemort.
     
  3. mcatrage

    mcatrage Raptured to Hell

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    Alright I guess

    But who came first? Voldemort or Harry?
     
  4. PsychicLunar

    PsychicLunar Third Year

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    That's like the "chicken or the egg" question that I keep hearing. I won't hurt my brain by trying to think up a theory either, I'm fine with that question unanswered... I think it's supposed to be left for wondering.
     
  5. Cthulu

    Cthulu Unintelligent Bigot

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    but the "chicken or the egg" questin is easy... Due to the evolution theory we can deduce that the egg came first, being laid by an middlebreed or very close relative that laid the egg due to evolution (aka mutation)... :)
     
  6. DemonDream

    DemonDream Professor

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    But looking at it from the religious point of view, the chicken came first, as God would not bother with evolution, according to religious fanatics. So it becomes a question of Religion or Science? Which do you believe?

    But on topic, this story seems very interesting. Sadly, it is far to short to be a real story, this is more of a prologue. But since it seems unlikely that it will be continued, I will call it a one shot, and give it a 4/5 for originality, and good grammar.
     
  7. the-caitiff

    the-caitiff Death Eater

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    I believe in magic. The Platypus is clearly the mother of at least four different species, and the mythical Dropbear. One can only guess will come out of those eggs.
     
  8. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    ..Interesting read. Short but good. Decent grammar and spelling. Id give it three and a half or four out of five.
     
  9. Lightning89

    Lightning89 First Year

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    A bit short for my taste, but good. I would have liked to read more...
    The best was the birth-scene.

    3/5
     
  10. pure-lilly

    pure-lilly Muggle

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    hmmm not bad i like it =D oh and i believe that religion and science can be considered together. besides the catholic church has already said that they believe in both creationism and evolution.